Rebirth of Global Mutation

If you don't go crazy for loans in 7 days, you will owe a few Dabuliu, and then you will end up picking up garbage everywhere, and your IQ will be worrying.

It starts with heavy rain and mutated creatures, at minus 78 degrees, how many people do you think can survive in the world?

This tentative heroine is a failure! Regardless of whether she is the heroine in the future, a stranger appeared in such a dangerous situation, and it was so weird that it was almost written on his face. The protagonist just let him into the team calmly, and he was approached unpreparedly many times. The author did not position his perspective clearly when writing. The boundary between God's perspective and the protagonist's perspective is blurred. Assuming that the temporary heroine who suddenly appeared is a bad person, the protagonist group has been destroyed by the group because the author knows that she is a good person. , She joined the group inexplicably, as if the protagonist knew he was a good person In fact, not only the heroine, but also many people in the team joined the team inexplicably. The author wanted someone to join the team, and the protagonist believed him inexplicably.

Complaints Sister, do you want to write about half-father and half-mother? Why do you want to write about the relationship between other people and your sister? You want to write like this Can't you set the sister as your biological sister?

Ah, can you change the settings? It's the end of the world, but we still have love and love.

The following are some complaints and I hope the author will take a look at: 1. People with superpowers can be seen everywhere. It is also mentioned that many people with superpowers have awakened in the army. The protagonist is still trying to hide his abilities. Even if the storage function is exposed, many places in the plot will not look like he is tied up. 2. The family relationship was described with great emphasis before, but when Sister Su was seriously injured, because she didn't want to expose her abilities, she left her outside at low temperature, followed the team, and secretly fed her spiritual water. It was ridiculous. As mentioned earlier, she cared about her very much, and almost died. She was also afraid that her teammates would think about other things. It was inexplicable. 3. We have the world's production capacity and have collected a lot of materials, but it is unreasonable to take risks for materials that have no characteristics. We have spiritual water, meat, rice, fruits and other spiritual staple foods, but we also run around for some garbage and import biscuits? Instant noodles? Purified water? And why does the Carrying World keep focusing on depicting animals that need to be delivered? There are hundreds of each type, and some are set to grow very quickly. 4. We don't get together, but we don't have reliable teammates so far, so why don't we write it out at the beginning, and just run around with my sister and the Black King; Gu Ning is okay, but Yu and Qi don't trust each other to push forward. Sister Jiang and Lei saved their lives, but the protagonist still dare not trust them. Lei was a great man in his previous life, but he was written as a 13-year-old boy who couldn't walk when he saw a woman. Why did he write these teammates? I want to form a team, but I don't have the backbone of the team, and I keep mentioning that the protagonist dare not reveal his abilities 5. An inexplicable single female protagonist appears, and the plot arranged when she appears is unreasonable, and she is said to be a tentative single female protagonist; the protagonist who is originally very defensive about others, even his current teammates You don't want to reveal your abilities, but you meet a person with superpowers in the wild. Without knowing what abilities he has, let Sister Su, a person with no special abilities at present, be alone in the same tent, and just use a look to make everyone feel at ease that she can gather information? ? 6. After the book is on the shelf, I have some affection for the character. Suddenly a female character appears, and the author even comes out and says that she is the tentative female protagonist. Which reader can accept this? I originally wanted to develop a relationship with my biological sister, female neighbor, and Sister Jiang who are not related by blood, but ended up with this plot? It would be better to show it from the beginning. 7. What does the author think are the current characteristics of this book? The protagonist has no powers, and his special abilities are not stronger than those with other powers up to the paid stamp. He relies on teammates he doesn't trust yet and doesn't want to let them know his abilities. He goes abroad to buy weapons and displays them, but he fights with fruit knives and fists? Using a saber or a fire ax is more reasonable than writing like this. In a world with self-produced capabilities, there is no need to search for daily necessities, and I don't want to cooperate with other people. So I don't understand what you want to write as a feature, risk? Are you motivated or currently capable? It was a bit unreasonable and I could continue reading it, but after seeing this, I still feel that I still don't have an outline. Do you need to first think clearly about what kind of story you want to express to attract readers?

Let's complain. The first chapter describes the protagonist's previous life and directly persuades many people. Anyway, I think the protagonist's brain in the previous life is dead. Don't be reborn. Is it worthy? The past life can be described as miserable, but being miserable does not mean that the brain is bad. Didn't the protagonist simply not grow a brain in the previous life? What's the point of being reborn?

It would be better if the author's apocalyptic book is released to a female channel. The author is not confident in the male channel's rational thinking and party-oriented thinking and whether it is reasonable or not.

After reading Chapter 29, I just couldn't bear it any longer. I subscribed for one chapter and just wanted to say that your sister's character has persuaded many people to quit. I wanted to curse people after reading it several times, so I only read Chapter 29! Being so taciturn, I almost wanted to curse.

The protagonist's sister is like a loser, can you write less about it? It looks unpleasant.

I haven't read it, but I just read the introduction. There are 20 tons of salt and sugar, and 1,000 servings of food. Do you want to say that the apocalypse is boring, buy less food and live the apocalyptic life for two days, then die after experiencing it, and then pickle it with salt and sugar to preserve it?

The data is intuitive, the progress is there, keep working hard! That's enough to add another chapter.

I'm either making trouble or on the way to making trouble. Can you calm down and develop properly? Trouble keeps coming one after another. It's too tight.

The supporting characters' intuition about the future (for example: he may be my guarantee for the future) is not necessary. When I read it, I felt that each of them was half-reborn, with subconscious memories of the future My personal experience was very bad.

First of all, space things grow quickly! I estimate that if there are enough people, we can support hundreds of millions of people! Space has no boundaries! The pig's feet were even turned out to pick out supplies! When I see an individual, I feel like a burden. People will not be crazy when they are not desperate! Isn't it delicious to receive space when meeting people, to give them seeds to farm on their own, and to eat by themselves? Just provide the seeds and don't worry about anything else! It's okay to collect taxes yourself. Anyway, in space, you are like a god. Are you afraid of counterattack?

It's really hard to calm down. I was poisoned by a newspaper seller n years ago. Then I read other books and got cured. I finally got over it. I fell in love with you today. You are awesome. I read the comments. Fortunately, I am not the only one who feels this kind of poison. Fortunately, I am not alone.

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Come on, it's a good book, don't be a eunuch

Has this book been harmonized? Why does it seem that the preface does not match the postscript? I want to write one sentence.

A eunuch? Traditional apocalyptic novels are already rare and hard to find nowadays Another one is missing

I really liked it at first, but when I saw that Yu Yin, I really couldn't stand it and gave up.

Why don't you post this topic next door? This topic next door became very popular last month.

I just want to ask if this adoptive half-sister has any romantic dramas with others? If there is any, I'll run away first. I'm too deeply poisoned by that newspaper seller.

What a pity. One of my favorite types of novels is too short. I think I could have continued writing and had a lot of room for imagination. It's such a pity.

There were a lot of bugs in the beginning and I put up with them without any thought. After all, it's the end of the world. I don't care if there are too many bugs and the store can't get rid of them. But after writing dozens of chapters, my sister who has been taking care of me can still write it. I'm really convinced. Brother, what's your mentality? ? Why can you give the image of your future wife to someone other than the male protagonist? ? It's not a life-saving grace and it doesn't describe many emotional scenes, so it's just given like this? ? ? Don't you think it's strange that the more you read, the more angry you become? Can't the Doomsday harem have a step-sister? Do you insist on inserting a messy emotional drama? The protagonist, Gu, Lei and Caitong can be reconciled. The sister and the author are so forced to insert a paragraph. Originally, there were fewer apocalyptic stories. It was difficult to find one that could be read. It was like the dinner was suddenly mixed with shit. It was still edible at first, but now it makes me feel sick. I don't think any man can accept that a girl who was definitely his was ended up being taken away by someone else, right? Except for my little days. Damn it, I haven't seen a post-apocalyptic article that appeals to my appetite for a long time. The result is like this. I feel so uncomfortable.