Lin's Immortal Path

Could the author not write about swords? Flying can be something else. Don't you think flying swords are terrible? Also, can you not learn sword skills or something?

What good can this family do? This is not as good as being a casual cultivator

In the beginning, it seemed that the family members were all the poorest ones... All in turmoil... There were too many of them. Are there any novels in which the family is already strong, and the protagonist strives step by step to become the patriarch and then lead the family to develop stronger? For example, it later develops outside the world, attacks other worlds, and becomes a super family that controls more or less territories. It's the kind of family that always likes to be treated as the villain in fantasy novels.

It's pretty good, nothing bad about it.

Beautifully written, keep up the good work and keep updating more

Please read "The Immortal Road to Immortality: I Lead the Flying Family". It has been collected and rewarded. Looking back!

Well written, please keep updating the author

The author doesn't care about the word count! No matter how much psychological activities are involved in your dialogues, can't you write more plot? The success of any person is achieved by following the general trend, coupled with his own efforts and a little luck. The same is true for the growth of a family. The world of immortality described by the author is poor and cramped, and nothing major has happened yet. As a result, the vision of this book is very low and the height is not high enough. Whether you can understand the world is one thing, but whether you can see the world is another. Since this book is set about time-travelling people, it is natural that they must have some great wisdom, high IQ, and overall perspective that the natives do not have. Otherwise, what's the point of "traveling"? If you give the golden finger to the indigenous people, they can also take off.

After all, it won't be updated anymore, it won't be updated anymore, it won't be updated anymore.

The book is good! Quite satisfactory! Good grass and above. There are currently no obvious poisonous spots. I hope the author can work hard! Don't stop updating

Most family stories start with the sixth level of Qi training.

The writing is very good. The author's new book is as good-looking as this one. The plot is 10% accurate and the characters are distinct. It can be said that thousands of people have different faces. The most important thing is that the author often discusses the plot with readers and listens to their opinions. Please go to the author's homepage to enter the new book Daming Death Remonstrance. Worth a look