A Certain Calamitous Hogwarts

To tell the truth, what piqued my interest the most in this book was the crazy spoilers of Fax Machine, the Source of All Evil, which changed the plot. The protagonist walks on the tightrope of the Abyss and uses the Philosopher's Stone to toss Quirrell in a fancy way. Harry enters Slytherin and is tortured all day long and wants to lead his friends to make rapid progress. Voldemort fights with Tom and so on. (There is also the empathy and concern for the fate of the individual characters reflected between the lines, which is something that many non-positive protagonist fanfics lack) But I don't know if it is because I am afraid of spoilers or what. These interesting points are not reflected in the introduction at all. Just reading the introduction, I can't even figure out whether the protagonist is a student, teacher or something else. I am even more confused about what he wants to do or what he does and how it relates to the original character. If the complete synopsis is not spoiler-friendly, then it would be better if the whole synopsis only tells a plot, only throws in a plot, or only conveys a will, without mentioning the content that cannot be covered in one or two hundred chapters.

Let me talk about some of the weak points of this book that I personally feel. The first is the division. This is really a pity. The fantasy division is quite lifeless now. Fans are better off investing in light novels. Even if they are fantasy and urban, it might be a lot better. Secondly, I feel that the introduction is too complicated. Generally, it is best to keep the introduction of novels within 8 lines (introduction on the book details interface). An introduction that is too long cannot highlight the key points and is difficult to attract readers. Probably the above two points are the main weak points. There are no big problems in the plot. Some people don't like to follow the group, but there are also some who like it. The author mainly doesn't know much about the environment of the Qidian platform, but if you write more, you will naturally understand it. I hope the author's books will get better and better.

This introduction. . . I didn't even want to click in to watch it because I was drunk. According to the introduction, the protagonist wants to expose magic to ordinary people!

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I really can't understand the protagonist's brain circuit. Magic is real and he has an inexplicable obsession with magic.

It's good to watch, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist, the ones that do have a female protagonist are boring. The main character of the magician is so good, and I think it is suitable for props, such as playing cards that can stimulate magic. The Dark Devil's Bodyguard is also pretty cool, almost like a p5. It would be nice to cut it up and make a vest. The greatest magician or fraudster at the end of the century feels quite handsome. It's a pity that only black magic has come to an end.

If you have any suggestions, please share them below, especially regarding poisonous spots. The author himself can't see any toxic points, and there are almost no chapter comments. He can't change it even if he wants to... Save the children😭

By the way, is anyone really watching??

Come on, author, this is really one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read. It is hard to imagine that it is not popular.

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