The Senior Sisters Are All Big Guys, so It Makes Sense for Me to Show Off.

I can finish the book and perform a wave of dragon sucking shit for everyone.

There is one thing that makes me unhappy. This author has made really fast progress. At noon, I was still complaining about what he wrote. I couldn't help complaining after reading this for more than half of the time. Now I want to delete the post. Now I suspect that you are playing me on a trumpet. Update it quickly, boss, we are waiting to see.

Ang... First time writing. If you have any opinions or are just a sidekick, please post them here. Squirting lightly will finish the writing without supervising it.

It looks okay, there is no problem, it's just that I keep pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. This system is no longer popular,

This is not refined?

Come on, it's very good. The style of this book is very suitable for beginners to read. There will be a lot of benefits when it is exposed later! But what we have to do now is to get over it first! Don't think too much about logic, just let readers enjoy it! We will consider Lao Bai's taste in the second and third books later, so don't worry about them now.

1. It makes Confucianism and Taoism look like clowns, which is very annoying to me personally. 2. He said that the two great Luo Jinxian were very impressive, so why did he, a decaying academy, do this disgusting thing for so long? This section is too intellectually depressing 3. I originally thought it would be interesting to go against the routine, but why did the male protagonist compete with that retarded person in drawing and writing? It's an old routine again.

The author may have been too involved when writing it, and there were too many flaws in Gu Qingyi's part. I hate myself for having a brain.

Yysy, it's too disrespectful for a newlywed to come out to listen to music. She is already looked down upon for marrying a loser.

I just read the introduction and complained about it. In the world of Xianxia, ​​the continent is called Shenmu Continent, and the first sect is called Shendao Sect. 😓😓

The author assumes that the Daluo Jinxian who practices Qi and the Confucian and Taoist saints are in the same realm. I don't understand how a broken academy with only one sub-sage as the top dares to threaten the world's number one sect with two Da Luo Jinxian. The protagonist's senior sister is Daluo Jinxian. She was suppressed by a sub-sage who sacrificed a holy weapon. Is the protagonist's senior sister so good? Forced wisdom.

As for the author, I suggest changing the previous one. First of all, this book is generally good, with senior sister + system + invincibility and bad performance (listening to the music). The main body is very good, but the plot is very problematic. There are many places where there is no sense. The protagonist has two senior sisters of Daluo Jinxian. With the support of such a big boss, there are still people who dare to call trash in front of their faces? Especially when getting married, the disciples of the sect said that they are not worthy of the saint. Do you think it is reasonable? Talking in front of the big boss would be a mess in any other book. Moreover, the protagonist is already married to her. You said you want to show it off, so you don't use her body. I can only say that the main body is good, but the plot is too weak. If you correct the bad things, the book will still be very suitable for all gentlemen.

It's okay, but can you stop doing it so often?

How are the realms divided into Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, and god transformation? But what the hell is this Daluo Jinxian? . .

I suggest you write less about women who have sex with women, as they still have some sort of psychological mysophobia.

Quickly refine

Women accept one after another. In the past, they only did it a few times and then ran to write about other women. If I were a woman and watched the protagonist, no matter how good my life experience, appearance, literary talent, I would rather Zisha than be with such a person. There are too many women, I'm sorry I can't watch them anymore

Author, no matter how many times I read it, the combat system and money system in the novel you wrote have collapsed into shit. Can you please stop using the terminology of the realm of immortality indiscriminately? , I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals, and yours is the novel about cultivating immortals that I think is the most like a martial arts novel. Can you please spare the novel about cultivating immortals in Chinese mythology?

Come on, recommendation tickets come every day