Immortal in the Pot of Immortality

My personal impression is quite good. I saw some contents that are different from other books. Because I have read a lot of novels, as long as it is not a long series of poisonous points, I can accept it. I can see some of the author's own thoughts and things that are different from others, and I think it is still very readable. I hope it can encourage the author not to give up.

Dear author, don't you have any inventory? I've been waiting for you all morning.

There are really very few Ji Xian Liu, otherwise I wouldn't have written it myself. I really like to watch unpopular themes, such as Jisen-ryu, where the protagonist is a magic weapon, non-human, or a cultivator, heresy, secret magic and sorcery. If there are like-minded readers in the latter part, I will write specifically about this unpopular subject.

So far it seems to be pretty good. There is only one very serious problem. After reading dozens of photos, I don't know the specific level of the extraordinary system, especially when there is more than one extraordinary system. The specific example does not distinguish how strong the protagonist is, and it is not clear what the enemies encountered are like, nor is it clear, which is quite uncomfortable!

I think there is a good comment, this is not like an earthly immortal, but like a corpse-dissolving immortal.

After thinking about it, I subscribed to a chapter and scolded you. I just wanted to scold you and feel aggrieved 😭. Jiao Xian made me feel so uncomfortable. Although there was no intersection, you wrote it and I still felt uncomfortable. It was convex. I really don't understand you guys. It's the same as when I watched the beginning of Yuan Zun. It's so stupid.

Sure enough, only new books can be found to read. It is so difficult to find a non-toxic book nowadays. I still like the fairy-xia type, and there are also earthly immortals written by few people! Come on, author, I'm waiting for the day you put it on the shelves!

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel like this is just a weapon spirit? Or it could be refined and manipulated by others at any time, and become a tool spirit of a tool man. In other words, a protagonist only dares to do this if he has a halo. If it were a local aboriginal, he would have become 007 long ago. 😒😒😒

I once imagined a version of the setting for cultivating immortals. The Great Sun is suspended in the Sea of Chaos, and transforms the Chaos Spiritual Energy in the Chaos Sea into Spiritual Energy to supply the world. The monks in the world absorb the Spiritual Energy, but they can only extend their lifespan but not live forever. The True Immortal trains itself so that it can absorb the Chaos Spiritual Energy to nourish the True Spirit and live forever. The Earth Immortal can transform the blessed land to make it immortal. The blessed land absorbs the spiritual energy of chaos to live forever, and can transform the chaotic spiritual energy into spiritual energy to nourish the blessed land and the spiritual realm in the blessed land. The cave sky is a large magic weapon that can swim in the sea of chaos. In the beginning, there was only one way to become an immortal, but hundreds of millions of people used this method to cross the single-plank bridge, and very few people succeeded. Later, the life span of the Great Sun was about to end, and the true immortals left this world one after another. They did not leave before because the Sea of ​​Chaos was very empty, and it was difficult to find a world with life. Generally, they would not leave the mother world. Most of the true immortals left, but some true immortals could not bear the disaster of the non-immortal creatures in their mother world, so they gathered together to find a way to save the world. Finally, they gathered the power of all the immortals to create a magic circle that could absorb the spiritual energy of chaos. Finally, relying on this magic circle, they built a large magic weapon with a spiritual realm inside called Dongtian that could travel in the sea of ​​chaos. It also allowed a certain number of high-level monks to become immortals. Such immortals could live forever, but they could not move alone in the sea of ​​chaos. However, the space in the cave is limited and cannot bring many living beings. They have also improved the method of using the world to arrange a blessed land. The blessed land relies on the world, so the internal spiritual realm is very large, which can support many living beings and a small number of monks to become immortals. But when the life of the Great Sun ends, the world will still end, and the blessed land will also be destroyed. In the end, Dongtian took the lead, and the Blessed Land pushed the world to sail on the Sea of ​​Chaos to find a new sun. The plan was born. Is there any version of "Wandering the Earth"?

I still don't know what the golden finger of a pig's foot is. Is it just longevity? Why is it that awesome people build a cave, but so many people with great supernatural powers can't create it? The growth of the pig's trotters depends on the wishing incense. Why does it say that it is gone? Later, it is set to support luck. Are all those with great supernatural powers fools? If you don't want to find a lucky person, there are too many things in the clouds and fog.

Definitely replaced. What's written next is all stuff.

I feel really bad that such a good book was ruined.

A large group of people also said that this was an earthly immortal. Are you kidding me? Speaking of corpse dissection, everyone looks more like him.

Thoughts after reading Chapter 52 Old wine in a new bottle. 1. Start various layouts and various shells. It gives people a very stable feeling. The Earth Immortal's insights also have some sense of rationality. An essay written by someone else invalidated Gou Daoliu's rationality, and the protagonist immediately believed it. 2. The style of painting changed suddenly. Under the banner of Earth Immortal, there were alternative shell-style and ancestral-style styles, in which young versions of characters from other novels were written in one's own book. 3. Unreasonably imitate the appearance of the Earth Immortal Ancestor. We only have a superficial understanding of Earth Immortals. The essence is that a traditional immortal cultivator refined a treasure of the universe. 4. In his heart, he has a very high sense of pseudo-Western upper class. 5. I don't know the source of the protagonist's arrogance. He is extremely distrustful of the Shinto society that cultivates immortality, and cannot see any of the protagonist's social merits. 6. What the protagonist pursues is freedom and longevity, and not everyone is like a dragon. Rather, he is a kind of fool who is sober when everyone else is drunk. He does not want to develop the world in the pot, wants luck, and takes the initiative to bear the karma. Pretend to contribute to social change, occupy the righteousness, and become a better person. 7. The Earth Immortal does not want to go deeper into the Shinto to absorb the essence and improve himself, but like the Machiavellian Immortal Taoist, he competes for the dragon. I tried a lot of tricks, but I ended up choosing the worst one. Summary: The lack of systematic processing can be said to be a highlight, and the concept of cultivating immortals is complicated. Pseudo Machiavellian fairy tale. With private goods between them. There is a way to build a utopia based on a stable life in a resource-rich society. The discomfort of eating other people's food and scolding their parents.

According to the novels I read before, this one is not called Jisenryu, but this one is called Qisenryu. . . . . Earthly immortality and vessel immortality are divided only according to the path. It should mean refining the earth to achieve enlightenment and refining weapons to achieve enlightenment. Is this a combination of the two? ? ?

I suggest the author send this one and start a new book. The stuff he wrote starting from Sun God is completely inconsistent with the style of the previous ones, and the writing style has plummeted by several levels.

The author most likely doesn't have an outline and just writes whatever comes to mind. Yi castrated Ding Zhen, identified as 90% eunuch.

I don't want to read the famous books on the ranking list because they usually contain knives. After reading a book for a long time, I don't want to read the knives, but want to read light-hearted and refreshing novels. The rankings used to change every week, and there was no shortage of books to read. But now there are almost no changes. I can only read the good new books that I find occasionally😭😭😭

The writing style before and after is completely inconsistent. In the first half, there are all kinds of metaphors for private goods, but in the next 200 chapters, it actually starts to turn into a composition for elementary school students earlier. Since the Star Way was spread in the cave, there has been almost no interaction between Kyushu and Shenting, and the same plot is the same as a single-player account every day. Except for the protagonist, all the characters have changed their faces and lost their souls. This kind of cave is like a stagnant water, with dry supporting characters and a weak protagonist who is busy pretending to be 13. For a long time, the protagonist's power has only one immortal, the protagonist, who doesn't have many trump cards. He owns a world, but everyone from the protagonist on down is a novice. While saying that he wanted to fight with Shenting, and at the same time cultivating from scratch in a leisurely manner (the inheritance was outsourced several times, and no intervention was done after it was distributed), could it be that the earthly immortal world is full of outstanding people and true immortal seeds. The protagonist himself estimates that there are ten thousand true immortals in the Divine Court. Can you even out the gap in ten thousand years? The protagonist is relaxing and recuperating in the immortal world, wearing a waistcoat and holding banquets, trying to trick the Queen Mother into giving people high blood pressure. I can only say that I hope the author can adjust his situation. The second half of the plot is too single-player and dull, and the protagonist has no motivation at all.

I hope there is no heroine. The heroine can at least let the protagonist go to a brothel to indulge.

The eunuch is an unfinished eunuch... The novel starts off very well, with ideas and images... It depicts the image of Lin Xiao, a genius cultivator of immortality and weapon refining, who created his own earthly immortal road. The only thing I am not satisfied with is that the protagonist in the early stage is still too wild. According to the introduction, he should have developed in isolation for hundreds of years, and compared with the outside world, but the result is that he keeps appearing and confronting each other after only a few hundred years. The concept of the mid-term novel is not bad. The story of the prehistoric era is accidentally arranged into the earthly immortal world. In addition to the feeling that the earthly immortal world has not developed long enough, it will start to fight against the bright fire of Shenting. More importantly, the past life of Li Changsheng actually begins to appear. It feels like it denies the talent of the protagonist Lin Xiao... In the later stages, about 200 chapters in, I feel like the author has changed. The writing is called a no-brainer. There is no trace of the wonderful story in the early stage, and the logic is a mess... The novel is unfinished, which is a pity! !

After 250 pages, it seems that someone else has written it. I'm convinced, I'm so sure it's all settled.

It is basically impossible to survive such a thing as love tribulation. Or we haven't encountered it at all. It's really hard to live with it. If you really meet your destined half, you really can't accept the loss. Unless I can fill myself up with other things, I still haven't passed the love crisis. Those things in the past were not love disasters at all. I think the most classic one is Zhu Jianshen and Concubine Wan Guifei. This is true love. If the emperor hadn't been 18 years older, he would probably have been with her. Even so, after Concubine Wan Gui died, Zhu Jianshen left after being overly worried for half a year. What can be overcome is not called a love disaster.

The writing was good at first, but after more than 200 chapters, it got worse and worse, and in the end it became a eunuch. Newcomers, run.

MD is dying again. The results in this book are obviously good. How can he still be dying?

I watched the beginning a few months ago and knew you wanted a eunuch. Sure enough, I touched the ceiling as soon as I started writing.

There is a beginning and an end. The first book should be completed even if it is just for accumulating experience. It will pave the way for you if you have long-term plans in the future. Word-of-mouth skills need to be accumulated, don't cut them off at the first time. I remember that if the first book is good, there will be recommendations or some hidden benefits for subsequent books. Most success does not happen overnight

I saw the latest chapter. It's not considered poisonous. For old bookworms, it can be justified. The main point is the main line. It's a good product. It's considered tall among the current works and it's Jisen-ryu. It's a qualified story. I haven't found many poisonous points yet.

The author has lost his temper. It's been almost a month.

At first glance, I felt that the author had something interesting. It becomes more and more difficult to understand later.