
All Heavens: Starting from Gu Long's Law of Cause and Effect Martial Arts
诸天:从古龙的因果律武学开始
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Do you understand what the law of cause and effect is? Set it up, pick me up a move and you'll be 100% free-handed.
Thunder, rain and dew are all gifts from God. Thank you to all my friends for their criticism and suggestions. Thank you from the bottom of my heart🙏🙏🙏 This is my first time writing an online article, please bear with me.
The setting of Gu Long's law of cause and effect is very creative. It might be better to cut the map faster. The creativity of the law of cause and effect martial arts can only be expressed in the non-Gulong world. In the Gulong world, the expression becomes an ordinary Gulong fan, because this is the rule of the Gulong world, and it is not weird. But in other worlds, there is the possibility of challenging new systems. For example, Lingxi One Finger vs. Nuclear Warhead, a style that adheres to the law of cause and effect but collapses is a bit interesting.
I think the martial arts in the ancient dragon world, such as Xiao Li's flying knife, are not the law of cause and effect. Their martial arts are more like spiritual power. You can refer to the mental and physical strength in the Wilderness. The mental power in Emperor of the Galaxy and those martial arts can be said to be the embryonic form of mental power. More directly, it is willpower. The power of the mind, the light of the mind, etc.
What you said in the comment section, the one who was 100% caught with bare hands, is right. Is it possible for the law of cause and effect to be more straightforward? Li Xunhuan only throws his flying knife when he is sure about it, and the protagonist follows the law of cause and effect. The goddess can also win by scattering flowers. Can Bai Xiaosheng write anything on the weapon chart? I wrote the protagonist's shoes and they were indestructible. The law of cause and effect doesn't make sense. Since it doesn't make sense. It's great. When reading the article, it looks like the Lingxi finger looks like a palm of iron sand, so the force of the law of cause and effect is gone. You'll be happy if you make Gu Long's reasoning unreasonable. I haven't read many Gu Long books, so I may be right or wrong.
I saw Loneliness, not because it was poorly written, but because I really saw Loneliness.
In the early stage, I just wrote it casually. Many of the settings were not rigorous because I wanted to pave the way for the future. But it turns out that even if you want to pave the way, you have to take into account the overall feeling Thanks to everyone for their criticism and suggestions. The second story will be coming soon. It must be better than the first one.
Let me talk about it first. There are too many inner dramas. It stands to reason that there are more inner dramas in Gu Long's novels, but this is limited to the author's level. The result of too many inner dramas is that there is no foreshadowing and it is particularly fragmented. You cannot imagine that a time traveler will have such strong feelings. In order to solve this problem, the author created a whole substitution type of memory infusion, then a bigger poisonous point comes. Your emotions are not determined by your own experience, but a bunch of memories that are unknown whether they are true or false, stuffed into it by the system or something else. You, the people you care about, and the emotions you care about are all created by others. Can you think about it? It's better to soul-transmit the plot character, another one, and don't want to experience the whole experience card! You write a cause and effect point. The function of this thing is that it can be possessed by the person who caused the cause and effect with you. You can also set the deeper the cause and effect, the greater the power. This is why you have to make do with the plot, instead of a one-time experience card that can be drawn. People can accept the purchase of one-time services, but cannot accept the extraction of one-time services.
Your writing style is more suitable for writing romantic dramas on female channels.
Thanks to Yang Liuqi aiyuan for sending the recommendation ticket, thank you thank you🙏This is the first time I have received it There is also a brother without a name who also thanks me🙏
Li Xunhuan only used his sword when he was sure of hitting it.
I know you're trying to bury the hatchet, but I feel like your writing is messed up instead.
They are all rubbish, but I, Fengyun Six Destruction Sword, am invincible in the world for twenty-three days.
I couldn't watch the chapters when I saw Pig's Feet looking for the little brother. There were too many inner dramas in Pig's Feet. These psychological descriptions made people think that Pig's Feet was a bit clever and funny, which was very different from the previous image of Pig's Feet. Moreover, the inner drama kept calling the little brother and little ancestor, like a loyal old slave of the Xie family. Quite poisonous
In the clouds and mist, he is still abusing the main article! The setting of Karma Walker is really poisonous. Is this a routine from ancient times?
Tell me some of my feelings
I have never written an online article, so I may not be able to give you much professional advice, but if you ask me "Do you feel comfortable watching it", I can simply talk about my feelings and hope it can help you. 1. Typos. There are more or less typos in each chapter. I hope that after the author finishes writing, he can take a few minutes to check and minimize the typos. 2. Theme. I really don't know much about Gu Long's martial arts novels. When I saw the author writing about Gu Long's martial arts fans, I lost half my interest. Of course, this may be my problem. Actually, I don't recommend that newcomers start writing about Gu Long's martial arts fandom. Relatively speaking, there are still more people who are familiar with Jin Yong's novels (I didn't say that Gu Long's novels are not good). If the author wants to write a martial arts fan of Zhu Tianliu in his next book, he can try to have the protagonist start fighting monsters and upgrading from Jin Yong's novels, and then slowly transition to Gu Long's novels. Regarding this point, if the author has time, he can read Jiang Hai Hengliu's "Martial Arts Adventure in All Worlds" to learn more. Three, golden finger. I can't give any professional advice on this, but when I read, I often see the words "law of cause and effect martial arts", which is a bit confusing. Of course, this may also be my problem. Four, feel better. In fact, the author's writing is not bad. After all, I have read even the worst online articles. As a newcomer, it is quite good for the author to write to this level. But to say it feels good, I can only say it's okay, and I can read it if I have the patience to do so. But if I say it feels "so good it takes off," it's not that good. I'm not a professional, so I can't tell what the problem is. I would like to recommend a few martial arts novels from Zhutianliu to the author, such as "The Counterattack of the Infinite Supporting Characters", "Martial Arts Adventure of All Worlds", "The Void Ring of Plane Becoming a God", and "The Knight Traveling Through Time". The writing is pretty good, I can't say how awesome it is, but when I read it, I couldn't stop at all. If the author is interested, you can check it out. That's all I have to say. I hope the author will write better and better.
Why do you want to create the Lost One thing? Isn't it good to wander alone in the world of Gulong Martial Arts? You have to create a setting of infinite reincarnation. It's disgusting.
The biggest failure is that you cannot control the introduction of other time travellers.
Let me comment in one sentence. There are many grammatical errors and loopholes. The ideas are good, but they come up one after another. Many plots and stories are a bit cliché.
Huahua has too many intestines, so I'm tired of looking at them. Goodbye.
Why hasn't duck been put on the shelves yet? The number of words is spicy enough~