Perfect World: Beginning in the Mid-Ruined Ancient Era

I hate it when people describe innate talents as external forces. If even your own natural abilities are external forces, then why do you absorb spiritual energy? Isn't that even more of an external force?

Ever since reading the Perfect World side story, I feel like fanfiction trying to piggyback on the protagonist's power is a bad idea. The power above the Sacrifice Path is an unsolvable force. No fanfiction can afford to touch it.

I scroll through my phone like crazy in the middle of the night, but when I put it down, I feel anxious. Instead of sharing positive energy from Daojun, I only share harmful and toxic motivational quotes. Poisonous chicken soup is truly wondrous, harming heaven, earth, and the youth. A cigarette is lit on the left, and a power bank is plugged in on the right.

Let's talk about the female lead. The female lead is Liu Shen, which is a regret of my previous book, so even if I get criticized, I still want Liu Shen. As for how to become the female lead, it certainly won't be easy. After all, they've lived for so long; what haven't they seen? Therefore, only when the strength is sufficient and they remain together is it possible.

This girl is the first one to appear and is also the female lead. Casting an unknown girl as the female lead is a bit of a downgrade for the main character.

Does the protagonist really love muttering to himself? I've only read less than 10 chapters, but almost every chapter has a ton of self-talk, as if he's afraid no one will know his secret.

If you're going to write fan fiction, you need to thoroughly study the original work. Don't just write whatever you want and arbitrarily change the settings. If you're that good, why bother writing fan fiction? Just write a completely new book! Don't call it a secondary setting; even secondary settings need to be reasonable. Stop making things so chaotic.

I don't understand the point of offering these books for free for a limited time. Is it just a waste of a coupon?

I only read a few chapters, and I just couldn't stand it anymore. The logic is so far-fetched! A supreme being is undergoing tribulation, sitting there unable to move, and he just steals the supreme being's things? Are you in a martial arts novel where you can't move during training? 🤧🤧🤧

... There are too many comedic elements mixed in... And why is there immortal gold from the era of "Covering the Sky"? The immortal gold from "Covering the Sky" and the perfect immortal gold are completely different things. The perfect immortal gold can be used to forge immortal king artifacts, and it's incomparable to the immortal gold from "Covering the Sky"... Also, the excessive comedic elements make the protagonist seem a bit silly.