The Superman Family in Marvel

I have read Chapter 39 so far. It is very well written and feels very right. It really captures the feeling of a family and it is well integrated.

Time Travel: My family worked as dogs for SHIELD 😰

The good-natured protagonist becomes a street hero? ? ? If you really want the protagonist to appear as a saint, why did you choose to let him be a baby? ? I originally saw it as a good movie, but this part really pissed me off. The characters are too fragmented.

In Marvel, since Gon is written about, don't cut off his super powers. At least he still has super intelligence. He should not understand anything at one year old. Gon can understand TV. When the raccoon is a thief, it means that he should have super intelligence. Also, the movie clearly states that Gon has the ability to travel through dimensions. The movie says that Gon is in the fourth dimension, and Gon's abilities are still awakening, at least he is invincible.

What can I say, the subject matter is well chosen. This is the first time I have seen Superman chosen in The Incredibles. The protagonist's self-perception is very poor. He knows what world he is in and has such strong abilities. I think it is the biggest flaw that he is just lazy. Many novel writers now like to write like this, which is quite disgusting. Moreover, the protagonist's sense of presence is not very strong, and many of his performances are still those in The Incredibles. To be honest, there is no difference between him and the natives. Moreover, I think that the four members of a family with super powers will probably end up being unfinished. Judging from the current chapter 19, you have not arranged the roles for the four members of the family, so you will not be able to write a long story.

When it comes to Asgard, the plot is very cerebral. War is not a child's play. Life and death are unpredictable, so you rush to fight for others? You don't even know who started the war, so you serve as a pawn. Good Luck 666

Do you think the Incredibles family is very similar to the Fantastic Four? The father is similar to the stone Titan and can strengthen himself through exercise. The mother is obviously Reed, the daughter is the Invisible Woman, the eldest son has a personality similar to Johnny, and the younger son is constantly awakening superpowers like Franklin.

The author can set it up like this. The protagonist is similar to Franklin. He thinks he is the hero of the Superman family, and then his powers are activated, so Marvel has a Superman family. His own abilities are also blocked, and he only shows Xiaojie's abilities. The awakening of his abilities later is to unblock his own abilities.

The protagonist of this book should be Xiaojie's family rather than Xiaojie alone.

It's a very good book, and it fits the character of this family very well. They are originally government agents, and it is normal for them to cooperate with S. H. I. E. L. D.

I quite like The Incredibles. I feel that the author can start from daily life. To be honest, the protagonist prototype is very strong in the second movie, but it is not enough in Marvel. No matter how talented he is, he can't compare to Franklin. Especially the chapter where the protagonist moves and practices at night is very strange.

This book has deviated from its original intention, and the outline needs to be drastically revised.

I've read more about Tony than about his family. Don't focus on Marvel and the protagonist when writing group portraits. There is really little content about his family.

I hope the author can continue to describe a family as the protagonist. After reading too many novels about one person killing and killing, I am a bit tired of aesthetics.

A few shortcomings: 1. The protagonist doesn't have many scenes. 2. I don't feel that the protagonist is invincible and needs to be upgraded. I thought it would be like Franklin's way of going back in time and creating a universe with a wave of his hand. Unfortunately, it is not the case. Anyone can fight with the protagonist. Like many novels, it's a piece of cake. The two lines on the cover make everyone excited and think it's just a matter of seconds. The result is that you may not be able to see it even after it's finished.

The person who wrote the book must have never been to junior high school, otherwise how could he have lost? I am very powerful, but he is weaker than me, so he lost. Such words can be written, and there is a sentence pattern like this every few pages. Jue Juezi, it makes my brain hurt to read it.

I feel like I'm going to collapse in the last few chapters. Just look at this plot. If the author can grasp it, it will be over. If he can't grasp it, he will be a eunuch.

I only see the American worldview brainwashed by Hollywood movies. It's too divisive! What the hell?

What a shame, the idea is really great

Full of American thinking, values ​​and arrogance, he entered the battle for the crown prince without asking anything.