The Mightiest Dragon of the Beast-Taming Era

Let's talk about your feelings after reading Chapter 450: 1. The protagonist's image creation is obviously insufficient. Although it is mentioned that the protagonist wants to become the strongest dragon master, judging from the content of the text, it does not feel that the protagonist has a strong personal belief. He has participated in various secret realms many times, all of which are passive participations. The author forcibly creates various objective conditions for the protagonist to participate in the secret realm, and then every time it must involve an epic or legendary beast contest, it feels like it is completely forcing the drama. Can't normal exploration of secret realms enhance the protagonist's strength? 2. The main line is unclear. Various events lack priority, and the descriptions of important events and general events are all in the same words. As a result, the current feeling after reading this book is that there are too many events, too complicated, and two chapters are needed for insignificant supporting characters, which is a waste of readers' enthusiasm for reading. 3. The article is too watery. Things that can be explained in short words have to be expressed in a few paragraphs. As a result, the content of each chapter promotes the development of the storyline very little, which leads to the slow progress of the overall plot.

I really don't understand why? The writing of the male protagonist is so cowardly and frustrating. I read it and I felt aggrieved. Sometimes the writing is good, and sometimes the writing is like garbage, like shit. You are the author, when will you die? Aren't you the one who has the final say?

Can you change the routine? First you were questioned, then you were ridiculed, and finally you were slapped in the face by pretending to be cool. This routine has been used from the beginning to now, isn't it annoying?

After seeing the evolution and fate of cats, I can't stand it anymore. First of all, the author's description of the characters' appearance is the kind of marginal description five or even ten years ago, and many women who only appear once or twice have to describe how big they are. It's annoying. Moreover, I was really impressed by your description of the main character surrounded by women. Don't tell me that I forgot about it because I watched it for a long time. I saw it in two days. Secondly, do you have no outline? I don't want to read it when I see it. It's because of your inexplicable adventure and then the inexplicable conflict. What kind of island turtle is this? If you don't add this island turtle going crazy, how can you die? Without adding this paragraph, wouldn't it reflect the preciousness of this thing? Also, please be more careful. If you want to break the admission ranking, you can only describe the fight between the protagonists. Why are you writing about the battles between the supporting characters in such detail? It's three o'clock in the morning. I'm tired of reading this paragraph. I'm sorry for the bad tone.

The author describes less about the character's appearance and more about the character's personality. Your descriptions of the female characters' breasts, faces, lips, and legs are completely unnecessary and even offensive. What age is it now? Even female protagonists are no longer popular in online articles. It is really unnecessary for you to still write these lightly brushed descriptions of women. You show your character more through your words and deeds, which is much more attractive than your third-rate description of appearance. And if you insist on writing about appearance, then I advise you to write less about people and more about animals. To be honest, those of us who read about beast control don't care at all what the person looks like. As long as you write about beast control well and brilliantly, people will read it.

I feel that the transition of the plot is not smooth at all. It is an old problem that when the protagonist is at a very low level, there will always be plots with top characters. For example, when the protagonist is still around the third level, he has already started to meet the legendary beast master and this dragon and that dragon. There is no need to engage in such plots. You can encounter the transformation stage every day during the foundation period. This is not a great thing. The protagonist's luck has been low to a certain extent. If he were not a protagonist, he would have died countless times. , And I can't understand this when the third level meets the eighth level. The third level is around the middle of the fucking Qi training, the fifth level is the perfect Qi training, the sixth level king belongs to foundation building, the seventh level overlord golden elixir, the eighth level legendary Nascent Soul, and the ninth level demigod belongs to the transformation god, I just To use an analogy, how can you encounter the Overlord Legend every time? It's outrageous. No matter how powerful you are at foundation building, it is just foundation building. In the garbage Yuanying, it is still Yuanying. This is just like leveling in the game. If you are level 10 and go to level 50 monsters, isn't that a joke? Occasionally, it's okay to make a transition and show a high-level sense of existence. You are obviously not the one. Nowadays, novels always come up with stories that can withstand the pressure of the strong, which proves that you have a good character. Isn't this a fool's theory? One sentence to describe this kind of person is that one who is ignorant is fearless. It is because you are "ignorant" that you are "fearless". The best book that has been written for so many years is Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Lao Han really said that when I practice qi, I fight with those who practice qi, and fight with foundation building. How can there be a situation where my Yuanying fights with the transformed god? I don't know whether I respect the strong or not, but I am not as strong as you, so I will stay away from you. How can I be like you? Like this, keep trying, and finally you are invincible, then you can stop eating beef, I can do whatever I want on horseback. If your strength is not good, then you are a fellow Taoist. It is raining heavily, and that mustache tells Old Han to get out. Old Han didn't say any nonsense. His strength is not as good as others. Isn't this normal? As a result, if anyone says this to the protagonist in these books, Daozu will fight with you. I can't understand.

It's funny, isn't it? In Chapter 190, you were attacked by someone and you didn't tell the teacher to take it back and just have fun by yourself? Weird

The early stage of this book is similar to that of a certain Lu's book. However, the protagonist there applied for graduation after entering college for half a semester. After graduation, he has been exploring various secret realms or earning evolutionary resources. In comparison, the one here is inferior. He used a routine from beginning to end and read 450+ chapters. In just two words, I feel really exhausted after reading this.

There is really nothing sinister about it, the writing is very smooth, the plot is not boring, and I can read it in one sitting. Sometimes you can get one or two laughs in the chapters. It's quite humorous and the atmosphere is relaxed. I like it very much. I'm very satisfied with what I've seen so far. Cheers, author!

I just came to see the dragon, but you told me to get a cat?