Take the Wizarding World with You

Damn it, isn't this an alternative version of my world of cultivating immortals? I hope the author can write better.

So far, there is no extraordinary feeling at all😅

Dear author, can you add the "cursed dimension"? I've thought about the settings. In this way, it can also be streamed with you, or it can be written as infinite, heavenly stream, or game alien world. 🤓🤓

I hope that the power level can be shown as soon as possible, otherwise there will be no sense of expectation from a level 3 wizard apprentice to a level 2 wizard apprentice. I want to know what the power levels of most people around me are. This aspect is a bit vague.

I haven't read the book, so I'd like to give you some advice. Don't use memes, especially Internet celebrity memes, like +10086 9527, really fragrant, etc. The first batch of memes had a very good effect, the second batch was so-so, the third batch was completely useless, and the fourth batch was very effective, and successfully won the dislike. Just like the novel, we created the waste material stream, the divorced engagement stream, and the mortal stream, which attracted many readers. The first batch of people who followed the trend had a good effect. After more people followed the trend, how many people now just give up after seeing the broken engagement, waste material stream, and the like. (Representing only personal opinions)

As a new author, everyone is welcome to discuss the plot in the book circle. Thank you everyone! (≧∇≦)/

The writing is pretty good so far. If I keep writing at a high level, I will definitely become popular. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch, and it's better to have an outline. Many authors just collapse without an outline. Also, it is very important for newbies to keep up with the updates and not interrupt them. Otherwise, people will think that the eunuchs will not be able to keep up with the reading. It is best to write some archives to prevent emergencies.

It's too watery, and there's too little content in the Wizarding World.

Didn't you learn a single witchcraft in your senior year of high school? After entering the university, you will be directly promoted to a formal wizard. Witchcraft circuits can be carved and sold for money (without charging)

I don't mean anything elseヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

Shit, now among the 10 authors, at least three are positive.