An Ordinary Policeman in Wulin Gaiden

The preface of the article does not match the postscript, the relationship between the characters is unclear, the plot is written as a fan fiction, the character collapses, the main creator has no shining point, let's cut it off ,

The opening chapter leaves you speechless! Why are you ordinary? What prefix doesn't work? I have to use the unrealistic and ordinary word.

The protagonist has a serious lack of sense of responsibility. He caught the prisoner only by learning martial arts and letting him escape. And with a game mentality, we the audience can laugh it off with the case of a male and female evildoer, but when it happens in reality, not to mention breaking the hands and feet, at least they have to be arrested and brought to justice to be punished. Maybe the incident will be suppressed by Xiao Guo's father in the end, but as a police officer, if you don't want to enforce the law, why don't you use your identity as a police officer to become a ranger?

The plot is inconsistent with a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. The protagonist is dispensable and follows the plot. He has no sense of existence and is boring.

It's hard to write a Wulin fanfic. I feel like there's only one Wulin fanfic I can read in so many years.

Big Brother Six Finger Xuanyuan is blind because of his eyes, not his mind.

The author writes the plot very awkwardly, skipping or brushing off key plot points every time. The highlight of the book is that it's OK outside of the plot, but as soon as the plot is involved, it immediately falls apart and is unbearable to watch.

The author's ideas and concepts are good, but the writing style is so poor that it doesn't taste like it at all. _(:з∠)_It is recommended that the author read it from the beginning and then revise it.

Anyone who has watched the drama carefully knows what kind of person Guo Furong is. Isn't it serious to forcefully beautify the drama?

The character of the protagonist written by the author is really emmm. Guo Furong has done so many bad things, and the protagonist is not disgusted at all. She licks it with a shy face, and does bad things with good intentions. She doesn't care about her intentions. Let's just say that she wants to rub off on her father. It's okay, but we can't write it like this. There is no distinction between right and wrong. What I said before is in a comedy, but it doesn't work in reality. Just turn around and slap yourself in the face.

In many places, the preface and follow-up are inconsistent, and the plot develops in a fractured manner.

You can find an old Huahua guy and do Qinggong or something like that.

Well, it's better for you to form a big world view, rather than just one town, such as your yamen, such as Liumen, etc. If you write it down like this, the rest of it will be empty and boring.

It's as tasteless and tasteless as plain water!

The more I read, the more irritated I became and I withdrew it. I wish the author better and better writing.

Don't you even read the author? Paragraphs, punctuation marks, typos, and plot points

A thousand birds in the forest is worse than a bird in the hand