The Immortal Crazy Thunder That Begins from the Peerless Tang Sect

You have really ridiculed all the poisonous points that fandom should not tread on. Fandom is just fast food and cool writing. To put it bluntly, if you have some writing skills, would you write fan fiction? Why do so many people write fan fiction? It's just a waste of money, and they can't even write cool articles. There are a lot of articles in the world, and it just depends on who can polish the writing. The overall outline framework is already there, because it is a fan system, and all that is left is the details. And it's precisely these reproductive aspects that you have abused. If you give the heroine this book, you will become a eunuch. 1: Don't rely on too many systems and don't learn too much. It will look messy and messy. Adding the system under one person, are you planning to write a story about traveling through the heavens later? And let's take a look at the Freljord's Eternal Thunder in League of Legends. Does he need to learn from so many messy ones? 2: There is also a point of giving away treasures, giving away skills, and giving away to the heroine. You write novels, so you should understand. Anyone who reads novels will understand it. Do you think you are writing for readers? Remember that what you write is a fan, not your own creation. This is a bit confusing, so don't write a fanfic. 3: The main character's fan structure is poor and the creativity is good. I thought of borrowing a big IP and won over some readers in advance, but it is too complicated. Is it difficult to directly apply the Wuhun system? Don't mess with other things, unless you want to write about traveling through the heavens. 4: Story points, just make some readers feel happy when they see it. If you know this, you can make a lot of money. It's no use breaking your fingers if you don't know how. Remember, fandom is not your own creation. These are suggestions, personal opinions.

The external soul bone was given away, and the exercises were learned.

The writing is still a bit poor, especially the dialogue, which just feels lackluster. 😥 There is also the external soul bone, which has not yet taken shape after being revealed. What is the use of this plot? Is it just to disgust the readers? 🤔 The protagonist also revealed his abilities to others. Is he really not afraid of being caught in a dark room and forced to ask about his skills every day? Anyway, I feel that no one should reveal it except his parents. If you don't have parents, just keep it to yourself. As for making progress together, how can I put it, you are cheating, these things are of little significance. If the protagonist changes the map, there will probably be no connection. For such a tool-like character who does not grow up with the protagonist, he also explains part of his own abilities, especially since this ability is outside the soul power system, which is really useless.

I have a lot of ideas, but they are quite poisonous. I have no brains to give a rich boy a gift.

I read Chapter 13 and couldn't stand it anymore. The external soul bone was sold and I couldn't stand it anymore. I saw other people's comments about giving the exercises to others, which poisoned me to death.

You made up your mind to save my younger brother out of nowhere. You are acting like a bitch out of nowhere. Damn it!

My evaluation is that if I cut it and reopen it, there are too many poisonous points now, so it is better to rewrite it than to completely change it. Moreover, I was attracted to watch the alliance IP, and the result was that it was even worse than one person. . Multiple systems and multiple abilities is one of the biggest poisonous points in fan fiction. It is recommended that you only use Volibear's template. After all, the Freljord's demigod style can be said to kill Buddha if it blocks Buddha, and kills God if God blocks it. Moreover, for the setting of Douluo Continent, I suggest that the soul skills before Wuhun Mami should all choose percentage gain soul skills, otherwise the soul skills before and after the later period will be just decoration. As a demigod, Xiong Xiong can definitely gain the first soul skill armor-breaking The second soul skill toughness gain (legendary tenacity and the like, reduce the control and damage received, or directly dominate the body and avoid control, what's wrong with a demigod having a domineering body) The third soul skill choose strength gain (furious bite, All attributes are doubled in the furious state. After all, the increase in soul skills performed by Gou San is quite outrageous) For the fourth soul skill, choose speed gain, or for the third soul skill, choose speed gain. For the fourth soul skill, choose strength gain. After all, Bear is a notoriously stupid person For the fifth soul skill, choose true damage The sixth soul skill is to choose immortality or ascension (the ultimate move of the Barbarian King or to remove negative effects, etc.) The seventh soul skill is the real body of the martial spirit The eighth soul skill is the sound of the sky falling The ninth soul skill is up to you As a god-level martial spirit, it must have its own domain, so just create a domain The storm gathers. The blizzard comes with slowdown and percentage damage. If the attributes are lightning and storm, it will directly come with stun control, serious damage reduction and healing. Anyway, cheating is fun Anyway, this is my suggestion. It can be read like this as a cool article, and just throw away the brain 🙂

The idea that Wuhun is a bear is a good idea, but just one setting of the fanfic is good, but too many will make people ignore it. Because most people in fan fiction only read the things or plots that exist in the original work. If you set too many private settings, it will be a bit toxic. I personally feel that the Celestial Master setting is quite embarrassing. I hope that the plot of the Celestial Master can be reduced in the future, and just write about the martial spirit of the bear.

It's enough to write about bears. I don't know what to do with another person 😰

To be honest, I was attracted by the title, but the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. Chapter 20 was already the limit. After reading the title, I had no desire to continue reading.

I don't understand it at all. Why is Chapter 4 suddenly in the world of cultivating immortals, now playing League of Legends, and now the landlord has to pay rent? Isn't this fucking pure water word count? Hurry up and remove it yourself.

How should I put it, I read a little bit, is there a conflict between the Immortal Crazy Thunder and the Under One Person? First of all, why does the Under One Person have to be under one person when there is a bear? Don't understand, Zhutianliu? I think Immortal Crazy Thunder is enough in Dou 2, or does the author want to attract people from the two major IPs to watch it? Dou Er can be a fun story, but you have to see how cool it is. The starting system adds Crazy Thunder and Kung Fu skills to fill up the talent. Do you need 2 martial arts later? There are so many of this kind of stories that I am tired of reading them. Just like a full-time mage, I must awaken 2 as soon as I travel through time. This kind of thing is not interesting and boring. I think that if Dou 2 Bear is enough, there is no need to open other plug-ins, because the bear can still penetrate a fantasy floor.

It's okay to just talk about Wuhun's abilities. I have to expose Qi and make the comment area full of comments. Why don't you see if you can change it?

I have read a few chapters and found that the plot is okay, but the setting is not rigorous and some things are not expressed clearly. I suggest you read it after you finish writing. If you are not sure, you can check it online. Overall, it is not bad, 🙂🙂

Many readers, brothers, say it is poisonous. And it's very poisonous and cannot be tolerated. Although my younger brother had two eunuch novels, he was still underage at the time and lacked perseverance, so he became a eunuch. In fact, when this work was first written, it was just for entertainment, and it would get the best of me when my brain gets excited. Unexpectedly, I signed the contract (Thank you to the editor for your great appreciation 🙂) Now that I have signed the contract, I will definitely write it down with an attitude of being responsible for the work and the readers, and strive to break the one million word mark. (Actually, the number of words in the contract was a bit large, one million words. At the time, I thought, one million words, a simple one, but later I found that it was difficult for me to guarantee four thousand words every day. 😟) The two major poisonous points are the external soul bone transaction and the martial arts. I have collected suggestions from readers over the past few days and are currently revising it. The soul bone thing is easy to modify. I listened to a brother and changed the incomplete left metacarpal bone into an ordinary left arm bone. The chapter about the exercises involves a lot of words, so it is not easy to modify. I will try to complete the revision in the next two days, and the updates will not be interrupted. I hope readers can speak out and make suggestions. I will basically read them. I hope I can make progress and get better and better with my brothers' suggestions. 😡😡😡

I wonder what the author thinks? It's okay to have experience with several books. If you are a novice, I will not be able to grasp you. Too many systems can easily collapse. Just get one from League of Legends, and then get one from that servant.

You can throw away the things you don't want. Why give them away if others don't pay the price?