A Dragon Who Doesn't Want to Be a Killer Is Not a Good Businessman

Check it out~ I have recently stabilized the 4,000 daily guarantee and the update time. The specific method is to speed up writing and saving manuscripts, so that it will not be full and it will be more laborious. The main reason is that I have a language test next month, and I'm afraid that I won't be able to review by then and will spend time cramming, causing a strange situation where the update will be stable and stuck. So although my outline of tens of thousands words basically has no lag, it is still better to save the manuscript with more coding points. I have been running around without recommendations for three or four weeks. The number of words has gone up, but there are no new books or new books in the inventory. Smart recommendation is not feasible because of collection. I am really miserable~ So! Please comment and interact when you have time, I am so lonely——

The writing is quite good, the writing style is very good, and the plot settings are also attractive. However, too many settings are thrown out at the beginning, which makes it difficult for readers to read. This book feels to me like a game that throws out a lot of settings at the beginning, and the player wants to directly press the fast forward button and enter the monster-killing phase. The kind of game that makes you irritated by too much plot, so you simply don't watch it. It is recommended that the plot should be the main focus in the early stage, and it is better to slowly throw out the settings. I have been a bookworm for many years, and it takes a lot of effort to read this book, let alone readers who are new to the book and have been brainwashed by cool articles. When I was reading this book, I really wanted to skip the introduction and other paragraphs, because it was very boring for me to read the background directly without the support of the plot. As a novel, it is important to make people feel relaxed, rather than boring like reading literature. I hope the author can adjust it. After all, there are not many works of this level.

The writing is very good, but the plot development is a bit confusing, and the main plot and branch plots are mixed together. The king taught him how to kill himself, plan the Duke's property, the life experiences of boys and girls, the purpose of the pirate group, the purpose of the court mage, and so on. If you have a lot of free time, it will be okay to read, but if you use fragmented time to read, it will be a little difficult.

A local map overview of the Lightsman Mountains neighborhood. This is a very hastily made version, with some strange minor flaws that have not been adjusted well, including the fact that many labels in the plain areas have not been added. In fact, there are many more villages that are adjacent to each other, but at least it can be seen. It may be adjusted later, but the most important place names in the early stage are basically already there.

I'm wondering if I should change the title of the book. I'm really confused. I have a few proposals in my mind but they don't feel perfect enough. If you have any ideas, please let me know.

I'm drunk... Why can my comments in the book club about my book be deleted by others?

It's just a novel, why is it so ugly? Do you still want to be a great writer? This is a novel, who wants to read something gaudy?

This wording is too colorful, it's so uncomfortable to watch😣

It looks a bit laborious and unnatural

I finally felt a little energetic late at night, so I revised the wording in response to the opinions of book friends to see if it could be simpler and easier to read (the plot will not be changed, and it will not affect any paragraphs and comments, and will be archived in advance). Is there any night owl who can chat with me~ I don't know if it's the sequelae of COVID-19 or the cold weather. I'm feeling dizzy and stuffy. I've been choking on my nose with the smell of blood for several days. I feel like I'm swimming in blood pimples. Brain cancer started on Baidu. Really, I am scared to death even if I am not sick.

It was recommended. After reading the first few chapters, my evaluation is: This novel really gives me the feeling of a silver writer. Down the line, writers who are good at writing novels just want to have fun and have no big pursuits. At the top, a few people have beautiful words and can tell good stories with reasonable planning and layout. However, silver writers are unable to get up or down. They have certain ideas but do not have the writing ability to match them. It's stuck there. The first chapter is particularly poorly written. How can you lay out so many settings right at the beginning? Readers are also tired from reading. Don't think that you are a young person who dislikes readers for reading too many interesting articles. The fact is that you are really not good at the beginning. As for the later chapters, they are better. But how many people can endure it patiently?

If you like this book and want to read it, if you have time, you can help me read it every day. Scroll to the last page until the number of people label appears. This data is very important, please!

Brother, don't give up, start again