Warhammer: I Am a Brave Warrior in Cathay

By the way, why did you let go of that elf boy? Or without any trouble?

I feel numb when I see the dwarves fighting against Cathay. I think the settings in the game are pretty good, but you should not write like this when writing novels. The dwarf race simply cannot support your writing like this. If you capture 800 prisoners at once, you will not be able to survive (personal suggestion)

At the beginning, there are nearly a thousand dwarves and a group of broken iron. They are so rich and they are robbing you of a broken caravan. In fact, it is the dwarf expeditionary force ambushing the four gods to choose the devil prince. At least the combat effectiveness of these melons and vegetables is basically the same. The plot at the beginning is really messy. The medieval dwarf is definitely the first number in the book of hatred. From now on, he will directly become the enemy of chaos that everyone on the order side wants to beat.

Big golden guy, bless us, strong and strong, punching chaos and kicking aliens .

How to describe it? It is obviously a magnificent city, but in the author's writing, it is like two or three small cities in a province. The characters (including the protagonist) are portrayed like a mountain hero.

Those who say they have a harem in Warhammer probably don't know how the protagonist will die in the future.

🌚🌚A single person wiped out an entire team of Iron Breakers and split them in half with a single blow, which made me no longer interested in watching them.

The Dragon Emperor guards the country? Even if everyone dies, he won't be a bird.

It's okay for the dwarves to rob the Cathay caravan. If you want to write about the Chaos dwarves, I think it's reasonable. But it's outrageous for the dwarves to rob the Cathay caravan.

The author feels that he has only played the game and has zero understanding of the background, desktop, novels, military books and rule books. I am afraid that he really does not know what the concepts of Shattered Iron and 800 Dwarves are. . .

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The author's writing is good, but there are many taboos in the plot arrangement, and many plots are quite discouraging to readers. The first villain at the beginning, Liu Pang, has enough hatred and there is no problem, but Sun Ting is a character that everyone has a good impression of. She is inexplicably pushed to the opposite side and becomes Liu Pang's daughter. This is more discouraging. If you really don't want to write this character, you can find another way to make her exit. Also, the story about the first villain Liu Pang was changed before the matter was resolved. What was the point of inciting so much hatred in the previous plot? The reader felt like he was punched in the cotton wool, and there was no way to vent his emotions. This kind of small boss should be terminated quickly and let the readers feel refreshed. The only refreshing point at the beginning is gone. He is still allowed to jump around and add trouble to the readers. Another point of dissuasion is that conspiracies are not allowed in online articles, but pig's feet must take the initiative instead of calculating and relying on luck. This is an important point in losing readers of online articles.

Brother Kong is benevolent and righteous, Brother Meng is righteous and benevolent.

The more the author writes, the more he lets himself go.

I can't stand it at the beginning, I can only say that I am very confident.

Yesterday, the content of Chapter 7, The Battle of the Five Armies (Part 2) was posted incorrectly, and it has now been revised.

I used Be'lak to wear Cathay to pieces.

If you don't understand, just ask, what is Yuyong and what is Aurora? ? ? ?

The writing is very good. Do you think this chapter is worthy of you?

I just found out that you have been a eunuch for many years

😲I remember, isn't Yuyong the girl among all members? Is the protagonist female?

It gets worse and worse starting from the Black Castle.

Ahaha

It's cruel enough. I'll give you a monthly ticket at the end of the month, and you'll be a eunuch after you give it. 666

Brother author, do you have a group? If there is no group, I will create one. Are you willing to join?

Does the author have a province + town distribution map? I couldn't find it after searching for a long time 😭