Starting with the Dragon Sparrow

There are a few slots, let's talk about them: 1. The currency system has collapsed. If you don't sell the Toyota car for 3,000 points in Young and Dangerous, it's useless to say that the points are low. If you buy a spare weapon for more than 5,000 points, you should sell it for 300. You are really rich in the early stage. You don't want to improve yourself and snowball to buy decorations here. The same goes for his younger brother. If a ninth-level person spends all his money on things, you deserve to be unable to move up. 2. The supernatural sense is stretched. Flesh and blood cannot defeat machines and magic. You have to think of ways to buff him so that everyone thinks he can beat him instead of bragging that he is unparalleled in martial arts. 3. The Young and Dangerous scripts are a huge failure in adding color. One-third of the scripts they have can be colored with cinnabar. But when you get the four-in-one version, you have to use special pigments. The effect has not changed at all. Are you a big injustice? And 234 is too rubbish compared to Ducai. You should first upgrade to the ultimate level to gain combat power and experience it at a high level. This will also help break the mirror, and it can still be used after breaking the level. It is simply invincible. 4. Two big scenes in a row are written but cannot be understood clearly. Your protagonist has no group fighting skills, so why should he be unparalleled? Fish soup is really a magic medicine. I don't work hard on compiling skills in normal times. If I explode and upgrade on the spot, it's just because the author is lazy. 5. The protagonist's golden elixir realm is really useless. He doesn't feel that it is of any use at all. A big sniper can even beat him 50-50. Why don't you use hot weapons? If you want to write about national martial arts, arrange the four refinements of skin, bone, tendons, and blood. If you want to write about infinity, start strengthening various medicines and bloodline professions. If you go down to the ninth level and look like a dick to a mortal, then you are still a mortal! Being able to hit the physical body and activate Wushuang is of no use. If you encounter a hot weapon, you don't have to stop immediately. You have to have some obvious abilities that mortals don't have before you can say that you are descended from the earth.

There is a problem with the world setting. Every world that the protagonist enters should be able to improve the protagonist's strength. The martial arts and Taoism in it should be able to supplement the protagonist's strength. But your second world, except for the so-called points, does not play any role in improving the protagonist's strength. Your world is a waste world, the plot is meaningless, and there is no excitement.

I was introduced by Gouzi, so trust him once.

Starting from Gu Huo Niao, they are all the same.

I think the most outstanding thing about Gu Huoniao is the lack of facial expressions of the supporting characters. In some copies, the supporting characters are even more eye-catching than Fat Tiger. I would like to see the author write it even if he is older.

Stop looking for me, Cuckoo Bird, I'm afraid Achai will misunderstand

From Wan Tian Qing to stroll here

Is this recommendation serious? (⊙X⊙;)

Author, why don't you go down to earth instead of obeying your destiny?

It feels a bit like a bird, you can take another look