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After reading the strength summary of the third copy! The protagonist's strength improves too slowly, there are three copies! The protagonist's current strength may not be comparable to Li Yan who has gone through the first dungeon! Let's make a comparison. The first dungeon also fought in the arena, and also gained a weapon and inheritance, but the inheritance is too little improved compared to Li Yan. In order to reflect the difference from the Cuckoo Bird, your inheritance is divided into inheritance talents and skills. Let's talk about the inheritance talents first. The first one, Wind Control, has too little improvement and can be ignored! The second shokubo relies too much on luck, but judging from the author's current description of the protagonist, he has run out of eggs a long time ago! Compared with Li Yan's Hook Star, the explosive power and attack are increased by 90%! You can tell which one is above and which one is below! Talking about skills, I think Feiyu's Weakness Detection will triple the critical hit, but only if it hits! It also occupies one of the few skill slots! Li Yan's blood dip has unlimited superimposed damage and can control the burst time independently! Divine Tea is the same as Jinghong Giangli, with a 9% awakening degree in the same direction, which can be ignored in improving strength! The second dungeon is the same ancient dungeon with more slots. The protagonist is carrying a good knife and cutting armor-piercing soldiers is just like a joke, especially when the first dungeon has not improved much in strength! Ordinary people are really so powerful. Can ancient people rule the world under emperors? ! The protagonist is Baji. Although it is said that it evolved from the battlefield economy, compared with Li Yan next door, his martial arts is more than 90% ancient martial arts, including military skills and so on. He also has soldiers to fight with those soldiers! You, Bajiquan are invincible in the world, right? ! He is so powerful, he was beaten like a dog by Xingyi back then! Let's talk about the harvest again. Li Yan only got one thing, and he could upgrade the weapon. You just chopped the weapon to waste! I got a skill in the middle, which increases the chance of evading long-range attacks by 12%, and the subsequent long-range attacks by 12%! In the case of an old hapless guy like the protagonist, this can be ignored! There is also dragon energy, which adds 3% inheritance! Compared with the next door, it increases attack by 10%, is immune to 5% of any damage, and scares all monsters! Summon characters, burn to improve skills, possibly solidify effects, and break through barriers! Still replenished every month! There are too many differences! There's not much else to say later! The third copy, I am too lazy to lift the third copy! To summarize the current problems, the strength improvement is too slow! The plot and the distribution of cool points are insufficient! The author's martial arts plot is indeed good, but in terms of plot and distribution of cool points, it is far behind Cuckoo Bird, so the best way is to learn Samsara Paradise and focus the fun points on the final settlement, but your final settlement is not improved enough! Then in the third dungeon, the part about people and police awakening is too old, someone was writing it 20 years ago! It doesn't mean that you can't write. Some authors can even move readers to the point of ecstasy when they write! But the author's writing style is really unflattering! I don't rule out that some people like to watch the author write about martial arts, and don't care about anything else. So, I'm just giving an opinion, whether the author likes it or not! Damn it, don't bother me! I am also a subscriber all the way, and I have also contributed to Zhuidu and Quanding! Can't I tell you my point of view? ! If that doesn't work, why do the book club and this chapter say they want to come? For me, this book is sometimes boring and it would be a pity to abandon it!

There are a few slots, let's talk about them: 1. The currency system has collapsed. If you don't sell the Toyota car for 3,000 points in Young and Dangerous, it's useless to say that the points are low. If you buy a spare weapon for more than 5,000 points, you should sell it for 300. You are really rich in the early stage. You don't want to improve yourself and snowball to buy decorations here. The same goes for his younger brother. If a ninth-level person spends all his money on things, you deserve to be unable to move up. 2. The supernatural sense is stretched. Flesh and blood cannot defeat machines and magic. You have to think of ways to buff him so that everyone thinks he can beat him instead of bragging that he is unparalleled in martial arts. 3. The Young and Dangerous scripts are a huge failure in adding color. One-third of the scripts they have can be colored with cinnabar. But when you get the four-in-one version, you have to use special pigments. The effect has not changed at all. Are you a big injustice? And 234 is too rubbish compared to Ducai. You should first upgrade to the ultimate level to gain combat power and experience it at a high level. This will also help break the mirror, and it can still be used after breaking the level. It is simply invincible. 4. Two big scenes in a row are written but cannot be understood clearly. Your protagonist has no group fighting skills, so why should he be unparalleled? Fish soup is really a magic medicine. I don't work hard on compiling skills in normal times. If I explode and upgrade on the spot, it's just because the author is lazy. 5. The protagonist's golden elixir realm is really useless. He doesn't feel that it is of any use at all. A big sniper can even beat him 50-50. Why don't you use hot weapons? If you want to write about national martial arts, arrange the four refinements of skin, bone, tendons, and blood. If you want to write about infinity, start strengthening various medicines and bloodline professions. If you go down to the ninth level and look like a dick to a mortal, then you are still a mortal! Being able to hit the physical body and activate Wushuang is of no use. If you encounter a hot weapon, you don't have to stop immediately. You have to have some obvious abilities that mortals don't have before you can say that you are descended from the earth.

There is a problem with the world setting. Every world that the protagonist enters should be able to improve the protagonist's strength. The martial arts and Taoism in it should be able to supplement the protagonist's strength. But your second world, except for the so-called points, does not play any role in improving the protagonist's strength. Your world is a waste world, the plot is meaningless, and there is no excitement.

I was introduced by Gouzi, so trust him once.

Starting from Gu Huo Niao, they are all the same.

I think the most outstanding thing about Gu Huoniao is the lack of facial expressions of the supporting characters. In some copies, the supporting characters are even more eye-catching than Fat Tiger. I would like to see the author write it even if he is older.

Stop looking for me, Cuckoo Bird, I'm afraid Achai will misunderstand

From Wan Tian Qing to stroll here

Is this recommendation serious? (⊙X⊙;)

Author, why don't you go down to earth instead of obeying your destiny?

It feels a bit like a bird, you can take another look

The writing is not as good as that of Cuckoo Bird. The plot is a bit too bland and the structure is not very good.

I remember that Premier Zhou's martial arts master seemed to be Baji, and he was once a master in Xingyi. He was also the chief instructor of the Central Special Branch. Very awesome.

If there were only one hundred subscriptions, would you be a eunuch? The first order from True Immortal Haoyu is only over two hundred. Do you have his perseverance? It may not necessarily be his luck (the book is a hit), but it can be his persistence. The new authors he supports recently are so disappointing, more than 90% of them are eunuchs, and they don't dare to support new authors!

Write well and don't be a eunuch. Both of Cuckoo Bird's disciples and grandsons are eunuchs.

It's very similar to the beginning of a book, and it's also the beginning of a serious illness. Someone comes to assassinate. It feels like changing your personal name and career. Of course I just read the first chapter.

The moment I saw the recommendation for this book, the book had been discontinued for two months...

I want a refund after seeing this. Why make it so complicated? The author must be ruined.

Oh, let's put some incense on it😥

But don't be like Guhuo Bird and let me stay up and down.

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What's going on? You still want to finish this copy before reading it?

I already have bad eunuchs, what else can I push?