Starting from the Human World

When I read chronicle articles, I just want to read daily articles. I don't think it's necessary to watch fights and quarrels. The article is okay, except for Chapter 31. The matter of light seems uncomfortable, and it has traveled through time. I don't ask how awesome the protagonist is, but it seems that the protagonist has not changed anything. Don't ask the protagonist to be a holy mother, and be a burden when you don't have enough to eat. When he was able, when Zheng's mother passed away, when there was Zheng Juan, and when there was a protagonist, he still sent him to the temple despite knowing that he was bright and sensible. I can only say that this chapter is a bit watery. There is no quarrel or conflict. It is just a daily write-up. Think about it slowly and write less. Obviously I have friends, colleagues, and family, and I feel that some things can be extended to some content. I can only say that the beginning is okay and not too irritating. The content after the questions is too concise. I need to expand the content a little. It needs to be in-depth and meaningful.

Wow, your literary flavor is too strong! Those who watched it had goosebumps all over the place! I can't stand it anymore and leave.

Every book in this world is written by Zhou Bingkun and the heroine Zheng Juan, aren't you annoyed?

She is like a holy mother, knowing that her sister has been deceived by a scumbag, she accepts it calmly, and helps the scumbag take care of the family. The author doesn't have any children. Which parent knows that it is acceptable for a divorced man to seduce his 14-year-old daughter? Can't write without the plot? What's the point? My mother was in a frightened vegetative state and didn't know what to say. This is inconsistent with human nature.

It's not easy to write about people who are fans in the human world. It is as difficult to write as a courtyard house. Most of the writing follows the plot, which is boring. It is better to watch the original novel or TV series. But if you don't follow the plot, there are two big poisonous points. One is that Zhou Rong does not change and still marries Feng Huacheng. The other is that Zheng Juan is still suffering. These two points are easy to be scolded. The most serious thing is that the male protagonist pretends to be Zhou Bingkun, but still asks Zhou Rong to marry Feng Huacheng. This is the biggest poisonous point.

What's going on? I really asked Zhou Rong to go find Feng Huacheng. It's a bit uncomfortable to deal with it like this. If you don't know, forget it. If you still do this after knowing it, she will have a bad life in the future and feel unhappy.

Beautifully written! It's a pity that it ended too quickly.

With such a start, how can you feel aggrieved? Forced conflict later? In all things like this, the point is to resist the grievances, rise up, and slap those partial people in the face.

The writing style is average, but still a literary youth!

What I'm writing about recently is baffling. In such a big era, time travelers can't just keep doing nothing except changing the world.

It's great. Come on, support all orders.

Well written, it's perfect.

Are you writing a story outline? How many years have passed in the blink of an eye. One thing passed in a few words

It fits the world in my mind very well. Keep it up and continue to support you.

If you continue to write, I suggest you keep it urban. Later, you can write the role of Chinese partner Deng Chao in the movie version. If you can write, you can challenge Hei Bing in the workplace.

Actually, Zhou Rong is not without emotional intelligence. How should I put it? Because she is a high-level intellectual, she must be arrogant in her heart, but her life is not good in reality. It would be better if she were simply a small citizen, like Qiao Chunyan, but she is not, so she seems to have very low emotional intelligence.

If you travel through time, there will be no family ties, but friendships. After all, the plot is the plot, and ordinary people only need to live their lives well.

Is this the only person in the world? Can you change your clothes?

Super landlord with deadlock: Looking forward to a return visit

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