Wandering in the Pirates: Adding Points to Evolve Everyone Fruit

After reading it, there are only two words left: add clock 🙂

Ah? I think the pace is pretty good. Isn't it normal for the pace to be slow at the beginning?

Okay, it's well written, come on

Does the author want the protagonist to always hang on Technician No. 18? 🤭🤭

It is obviously the most powerful fruit. This fruit can give the host all the talents that a person can have, including Big Mom's Steel Balloon, Kaido's recovery,,,,

Number 18 = Stracey? If so, you can kill Stacey without being killed by her, plus the Island of Gods and so on. Isn't the protagonist a Celestial Dragon?

This was 10 years ago at the top of the war?

Don't you have to pay for private use of the bus?

It's a pity. It looks good.

A thousand words a day is not as good as going to work.

It is indeed written much better than the previous book, However, there may be some problems at the current points. One is the aspect of Technician No. 18. If they are parallel to the protagonist, their tasks have nothing to do with the protagonist. If they choose to take a different route, the protagonist will have a killing certificate. If you are honest, you may have lost all the foreshadowing, and the protagonist's massage time will become simply brushing up data. In other words, this does not mean that simply exposing the character's intentions, drawing a big conspiracy will satisfy the readers' expectations. To put it simply, these agents will be exposed sooner or later, and it is very likely that they will be exposed immediately. The field is opposite to the protagonist, but judging from the intensity of the plot of the technician and the personal feedback (to be honest, the effect of forcing the agent to string the bow is quite good), it is a pity to kill him, but to keep it, how to deal with this bad fate is a bit of a matter of opinion, The second one, It is whether the fruit awakening is divorced from reality and meets the need for refreshment. For example, a certain person who awakens the magnetic field of fruit fruit didn't even bother to explain it. He was quick-witted on the spot and the chicken soup slipped away. This is actually the same as a person drawing a circle on a paper and stuffing it into the reader's mouth. He also feels that what he is feeding is a cake. It is scary to watch it. The last thing I would like to say is, the author, when describing the appearance of a character, do not put too much description, and it is best not to bring too much personal emotion. For example, the author controls a woman or Ren Qi, and describes a long section of the appearance and demeanor, and then you are disgusted with this, as The author also insists on writing a lot of personal thoughts, how much he covets, how much he covets, and the few who have the same appetite as the author are fine. Other readers can easily become disgusted and run away. In this era, with different views on love, it is easy to write emotional dramas and slip away a large number of readers. It is better to be more neutral in the portrayal

Such a coincidence, I also ate the Renren Fruit, but in the form of a handsome boy

I want to recommend it! It took more than a hundred readings to get the first recommendation...