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Give me some accurate words, should I write about the national football team? Write "National Football Team" and delete it directly
Why do you like to write about conflicts within the team and conflicts within the club? Can't it start normally?
The protagonist's mind is too childish, which is not the case in similar novels. When he saw Mero, he wanted to defeat them, rather than being so excited that he was speechless.
Everything else is fine, but this scene with the heroine was so embarrassing that I got goosebumps watching it. The identity of the eldest lady hidden in the slum is too embarrassing, the plot is a bit poisonous. Since it's a cool football article, it should be cool to the end. All kinds of actresses and models will suffice. I see you're not very good at writing emotional dramas. Don't write about this childhood sweetheart. It's too embarrassing.
Change the channel, football is not suitable for you to write about
Most of the recent football writing is like retarded writing. Just because you have 100% shooting skills doesn't mean you can score.
If your shooting is at full level and everything else is rubbish, it still won't make it. So don't be so stupid. At least you have to be above the average in all aspects. If you were as rubbish as the first picture describes, you would have been kicked out long ago. I really can't see that all of your stuff was rubbish at the beginning, and everything depends on the system to improve it. That's a piece of cake. You just don't have a little talent, a little ability, and a little hard work.
It's a good football novel, but I have to include some urban slapstick text in it. Why don't you play your ball well?
Football is not basketball. If you don't play well, you will be invisible. You won't hear the coach's nonsense. Unless there are no spectators, there won't be so many conflicts. At most, it will be cold violence.
It's too blunt and the plot setting is awkward
It is recommended to read it as a cool article, it has little to do with football.
I still want to listen to everyone's opinions. If you really don't like watching the national football team, I won't write about the national football team. Everyone can discuss it enthusiastically🤪