The World of Naruto Starting from the Sight of Sex

I didn't bother to watch it when I saw it was joining Konoha!

The emotional drama is so vicious that Shen Nong didn't even try it after watching it. The plot development is good, but the ability to obtain pirates is not added with the chapter. It's good to watch the party quickly. If you want to pursue the emotional drama, you can run quickly.

There is no female protagonist for the time being, and Kushina's identity is the younger sister.

I had a Chinese name in the world of Naruto, it was too dramatic.

It's quite annoying to Kushina, especially since many fan fictions set the male protagonist to have an affair with Kushina since childhood. Her character is too nagging and annoying. It's good to be siblings with only family ties and no ambiguity. Aren't Nonoha, Mikoto, Yukito, Hayakura, Guren, and Miroku good? It felt so uncomfortable especially when Yumu Ren was tortured and hanged by the immortal duo. This kind of strong woman with a conservative style of painting who doesn't rely on revealing her flesh is very good. Nowadays, I really hate the kind of arrogant and weird heroines, especially girls. On the contrary, I am obsessed with the role of a mature and gentle wife in the style of Yamato Nadeshiko. She knows little about things and loves others. Even if she has a harem, she has the demeanor of a big woman and can stabilize the harem without jealousy.

Some people look down on the deep love between brothers and sisters, and then think that there is no pure brother-sister relationship in the world. In fact, they are just a dead nerd without a girlfriend.

Why is the timeline so messed up when writing Naruto's plot now? Moreover, the jonins who lead the team are usually the chunin who leave the team. Furthermore, Hatake Sashige during this period should be in the ANBU, and he did not leave the ANBU until the end of World War II!

If you don't have the talent for ninjutsu and illusion, I don't really like this setting. Why did you travel through Hokage without talent? Which one is more enjoyable among the protagonists who have the talent of ninjutsu illusion and the top talent of pirate?

Naruto fan fiction is all about kneeling down and licking Konoha... Since the protagonist has the strength and understands the plot, why not go it alone and the trio in the Rain Ninja Village find a way to become a foursome? Are you afraid that you can't write it if you are familiar with the plot? If you want strong power, go to the three holy places and dragon veins. If it doesn't work, you can find a scientific madman to cooperate with you to develop a physique to make up for it. Goodbye👋🏻

In fact, the author's writing style is good. At first, I read more than a dozen chapters without reading the comments. I felt that the Chinese writing was quite good for similar fans. Although the golden finger was not obvious, it should be to facilitate subsequent repairs. But it is better to understand it in a panel way, or in a way that makes it clear from the bottom of your heart, so that readers can see it more clearly. As for the emotional scene, it was indeed a failure to persuade him to quit. If you don't love, don't be ambiguous. In novels, the pure friendship between men and women is frustrating. I want what I want now. After all, after reading novels for so many years, I still have a stronger possessiveness. On the other hand, I personally like Kushina more, so when I saw the plot of giving up, I felt inexplicably uncomfortable. In the world of novels, if you can't be willful, no matter how good the writing is, you will dissuade the minority.

The three generations of political groups are surprisingly good at disgusting their own people. Not on guard?

This book is already a hit, so I'd better stop writing it.

This book has been published and is considered toxic by most book friends, but this is the first book and I will finish it seriously. When you see the poisonous points, you can criticize them at will. You just want to relax when you read the book. If my book makes you unhappy, you can naturally say so. I just hope that your criticism can be a little more tactful and give me some courage to read the comments. Sandstone, thanks.

How many chapters does the author plan to write in the Kingdom of Iron?

If you lower your aura or the unity of heaven and man, you will be blinded by seeing and hearing colors, and you will not be able to perceive them. This is what assassin ninjas are like.

Write your own, write well, and update quickly.

Licking the vortex to persuade you to quit

Collect it to prevent you from being poisoned again during the book shortage

The writing is okay, but the early setting is not good. There is a tendency that the more you write, the better. Keep up the good work.