From the Dead Soldiers on the Border to the Martial Sage of the Great Sui Dynasty

Can't women be killed? He was going to kill himself with a knife, but he still let it go... I don't quite understand this.

There is too much nonsense, killing an enemy is a lot of nonsense. No one really sees this. If you want nonsense, just write more about golden fingers and martial arts. You have to distinguish the key points.

Too much nonsense, still ideal? Let's survive first.

The fight with the noble boy from the Eagle Guard (Wolf Guard) took so long. Don't tell me, the author, that only a few minutes have passed. Can anyone else track it? How does the protagonist escape after killing someone? Don't tell me that I was chased just this time and that I could run away after killing everyone. It's very unreasonable, and it doesn't look passionate at all.

Too wordy. I wrote n chapters to kill an unknown enemy.

I only saw two of them, and then I had too many words in my mind, which made me feel a bit verbose. . . . .

So much nonsense, too verbose

The writing is good, but too wordy.

As a bookworm of more than ten years, I think this book is okay so far. Why aren't there so many people reading it?

It's another waste stream. Some people would have watched it a few years ago, but forget it now. It's a bad street. It's the same old routine.

The update is unstable because of the sun. Don't believe what is said on the Internet, take precautions and prepare medicines. This thing is really painful. Don't believe those individual cases. If you question, you are right. Anyway, that's it. Everyone should be responsible for their own health.

First of all, I would like to state that this is the first time the author signed a contract. He is a rookie among rookies and a rookie among rookies. He knows that there are many flaws in the writing, but his level is so good and he is not harsh. Everyone can scold them when they need to. But there are some things I need to explain, and if I scold you like that later, I will pretend I didn't see it. Not a loser! Not a loser! The protagonist is very talented, but his Dantian was damaged and his constitution was damaged. After early repairs, his martial arts level will begin to rise! The status was originally very noble, but later he was killed and degraded. He will return to Beijing to solve the problem later! As for nonsense and hydrology, I don't know how to explain it. This is a personal stinking problem. You can criticize it if you want. Of course I will change it, but if it still doesn't suit your taste, just throw it away. Let's get together and go. But I still thank you for watching and I apologize for wasting your time! If you want to scold the author, just leave it in this message. After all, it's pretty ugly if all the book friends criticize me. Please show some mercy to the novice writer! Thank you again!