Forced to Work Forever, I Am a Righteous Partner

After reading more than 20 chapters, it is interesting that the protagonist Zheng Yi is a young man with American free thoughts. His life was relatively bleak when he was young. He likes to play games. Zheng Yi's golden finger is a god from the old era, called the goddess of justice. In the early stage, most of them were describing Zheng Yi's views on the goddess of justice.

The new author hopes to get the readers' opinions and opinions. My knowledge and writing skills are still growing. If the poison is too poisonous, please feel free to correct me. (If you are slightly poisonous, please rely on your poison resistance) Of course, the biggest obstacle to growth is always the eunuch. Even if the results are not fun, he will try his best to give a complete explanation. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 (PS. The following is an unofficial tone:) Review, come quickly! 🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺

It turns out that it is a relaxing healing novel.

It feels okay, although it's a bit messy, but on a 100-point scale I can give it a score of 75~90. Let's see how it goes in the later stages.

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I didn't expect that the books I just added to the bookshelf yesterday would be eunuchs today. . . 🌝

After reading it, the author deleted too many plots. As a result, the plot is too fragmented, and the character relationships and protagonist changes are too inexplicable. The author can write slower, it is a new work anyway. It's also good to practice your hands.

Chapter 30 has been updated with 2,000 words, including the part about talent scout Fairman discovering Zheng Yi, and Zheng Yi seeking Levi's advice when he has doubts. At that time, I still had manuscripts saved, but I was not proficient in posting chapters, so I got confused and missed posting... (☉_☉)

How should I put it, the work is good, but it also has certain problems. The highlight of the work is that the author has created the protagonist very well, a young man who has absolute freedom of belief, a cautious and rational character, a tragic childhood, but a fire in his heart, and his ideal is to analyze everything. There is a feeling of a evil leader who favors good. There are also many shortcomings, such as the writing style does not have an epic feel, the plot has too many jumps, the writing rhythm is not obvious, some supporting characters are not three-dimensional enough, the protagonist's opponent is too strong, the main plot is not clear, etc. The most important thing is that the writing tension is not enough, and some of the front and back relationships are not up to date. Also, if this is a cool novel, the protagonist doesn't show off enough. The above is just my personal opinion, I don't like to spray it by mistake.

It's this kind of fast-forward writing again. Many processes are simply deleted, and it's always confusing to read.

Three hundred thousand words. The out-of-circle index is 0. This is not something ordinary people can do

Follow quickly

So miserable. Anyway, more than 100 chapters

The book is good, but the early stages are a bit messy. Hope there is more.

I just read the first few dozen chapters, well, how should I put it? The plot is a bit messy and the pace is too fast. Some plots are not handled very well and are not very logical.

It's so confusing, the preface basically doesn't match the postscript.

Speed ​​update, I got a monthly ticket from somewhere else

In fact, wouldn't it be better if this so-called goddess of justice was replaced by a system shell and used tasks to motivate the protagonist to take action? Immortality can be used as a punishment after a mission fails, and then the protagonist unfolds the story in order to get rid of "immortality".

Author, the pacing of your story is so damn lame. Of course I enjoyed watching it, but sometimes I really didn't understand what was going on.

In general, the definition of justice of the evil god is too low. He is only one of the human gods, not even an evil god. The setting conflict is quite prominent, that is, the underlying logic is not perfect. Let's not talk about the superstructure. It is recommended to read more. If you read more, you will find out how good your writing is. Of course, you are much better than 90% of readers. At least you can write novels, we can only read novels.