Reborn in the Fiery Years: Let Passion Burn

The first few chapters have the flavor of a chronology, but you can't read it when you move to the Siheyuan. Moreover, the author even got it wrong about whose wife Yu Li is. Yu Li is Yan Jiecheng's wife, not Yan Jiefang's. Please, if you have watched the TV series before writing, you can just write a chronology directly. Your previous chapters of chronology are very good.

Study hard and make progress every day.

The beginning of the story is pretty good, but as soon as you enter the courtyard, something feels wrong. I feel like it might be better if I write about Siheyuan.

Commune Post and Telecommunications Office

Most authors of the Siheyuan fandom don't actually know that the vast majority of readers actually don't like the plot of the Siheyuan. So the copy of Siheyuan is like an old lady's foot-binding cloth, which is long and "watery" and has a strong smell.

Ha tui😤 At that time, who dared to scold rural people in front of others? What the hell did you write?

Travelers have a system. The elders in the family are the big leaders. If you go to the courtyard to be a loser and lick the dog, you are a loser. You can just play Darkness.

It's okay, but I feel like it's going to be overwhelming. If you don't rely on the system in the early stage, you don't have to write the system. In fact, everyone suffers in that environment. If you don't give the protagonist something, you can't play.

Memory of the times

It's Qin Huairu again, he was almost fucked to death by the time traveler. Author, can you have your own writing style? Don't bite the courtyard! Write a chronicle!