Reborn in the Fiery Years: Let Passion Burn

The first few chapters had a period drama feel, but it became unreadable once the courtyard setting started. Furthermore, the author even got Yu Li's identity wrong; Yu Li is Yan Jiecheng's wife, not Yan Jiefang's. Please watch the TV series before writing, or just stick to period drama. The earlier chapters were much better in that regard.

Study hard and make progress every day.

The beginning was well-written, but once you enter the courtyard house, things just don't feel right. I feel like it might have been better if it had touched on the theme of courtyard houses.

Commune Post Office

Most authors of fanfiction about courtyard houses don't realize that the vast majority of readers actually dislike courtyard house storylines. Therefore, courtyard house fanfiction is like an old woman's foot binding cloth—long, watery, and smelly.

Ha! Back then, who dared to publicly insult rural people like that? What kind of garbage is this?

The transmigrator has a system, and his elders are high-ranking officials. Instead of living as a pathetic, subservient loser in a courtyard house, you could at least play a game like "Darkness Descends."

It's alright, but I feel like it'll flop. You don't need to write a system in the early stages if you don't rely on it. Actually, everyone suffers in that environment, and you can't play the game without giving the protagonist some things.

Memories of the Times

It's Qin Huairu again! She's practically been ruined by time-travelers. Author, can't you have your own writing style?! Stop focusing on courtyard houses! Write a historical novel!