Unlimited Blade Works at the Summit War

I've subscribed to chapter 144, and the more I read, the more upset I get. The author's understanding of Akainu and Aokiji is different from my own. I still think that if Akainu were the Fleet Admiral, even if most of the orders from above were lost, they could still be carried out. If Aokiji becomes Fleet Admiral, it's precisely for the sake of stability.

Actually, your book is quite good, but if you don't let people comment on it, your chances of it becoming popular are slim.

After the author finishes writing, could you please proofread it again, correct typos, and remove repeated words? Although these things may not affect the reading experience to some extent, it's always better to make changes than not to.

The author's writing is alright, but the use of words like "while" and "always" in paragraphs is excessive. I personally suggest the author review the entire piece after finishing to identify areas that might be difficult for the reader to understand and then revise accordingly.

Even the only cheat code this book currently has is half-baked. I'm wondering if it's possible that Emiya's exclusive projection comes with its own combat experience and stat panel.

It seems the author's understanding of Akainu and Aokiji is somewhat different from that of the average person.

I tolerated all the minor errors earlier, like calling dual-wielded weapons "two-handed swords," but this story features Admiral Momousagi several years before the plot begins? I've never heard of such an admiral in the Navy before. Reading fanfiction really broadens my horizons.

This book is alright, it just depends on how it's written later. Actually, I think One Piece fanfiction is relatively easy to write. As long as the main plot is clear, the Celestial Dragons are killed off, and the other plots can be made to fit together, it's fine.

The incantation for Excalibur is completely wrong. The release of Excalibur includes Star Breath because, according to the lore, Excalibur is the Star Sword. The release phrase for Excalibur is "Chosen Sword, grant me power, bear the responsibility of the King, Caliburn." I haven't seen the later parts yet, so I hope it's more accurate. If you can't find the correct incantation, I suggest checking FGO or the FGO wiki.

I hadn't paid attention until later, and just flipped back to the first chapter. Honestly, the "justice" aspect, which is supposed to be a cheat code, wasn't really shown much. It's just a Servant template and points for killing, but all it does is sell some weapons that match those Servants. It feels like something's missing.