Unlimited Blade Works at the Summit War

I have subscribed to Chapter 144, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The author's understanding of Akainu Aokiji is still different from my own. I still think that if Akainu is the marshal, the orders from above can be carried out even if most of them are cut off. If Aokiji becomes the marshal, it is for stability. If it were not for the navy, he would still be for the stability of the sea. He would not even enter the New World and continue to maintain the orders of the World Government for 800 years. It is unknown how the orders from above will be transformed when they are passed down. Maybe what I said is a little confusing, but I just can't stand Aokiji's lazy justice. Your performance is really disappointing. Even if you hesitate about the justice of the navy, you will hesitate when the war is over. For every moment you hesitate, a few more soldiers at the bottom of the navy will die. I know this is not your fault. Even if you take action, they may not survive the next fight with the pirates. But you are a naval admiral and you are in charge of your affairs. Killing one more pirate can give a navy hope to survive. As for Kizaru's top performance, isn't he always like that? So I'm not too harsh on him. It's you, just because you behave like that, you still have the nerve to compete with Akainu for the marshal (I'm talking about the original)

In fact, the author of your book is still okay, but if you don't let people comment on your book, it won't have much chance of becoming popular.

After the author has finished writing, can he proofread it again to correct typos and delete repeated words? Although these do not affect viewing to a certain extent, changing them is better than not changing them at all.

The author's writing is not bad, but at the same time and basic in the paragraphs, but still, these words appear too much. I personally suggest that the author browse them after finishing writing to see where the readers find it difficult and then make changes.

Even the only plug-in in this book so far is half-baked. I wonder if there is a possibility that Emiya's exclusive projection comes with its own combat experience and panel.

I feel like the author's understanding of Akainu and Aokiji is a little different from ordinary people.

I have tolerated all the minor mistakes in the past. For example, describing dual-wielding weapons as two-handed swords are just minor problems. How many years before this plot started, General Peach and Rabbit? I have never heard of such a general in the navy. I really learned a lot from watching the same people.

This book is okay, it just depends on how it is written in the future. In fact, I think Pirates fan fiction is relatively easy to write. The main plot is clear and the Celestial Dragons are killed, and the other plots can be rounded out.

The chant of the Golden Sword of Victory is completely wrong. The liberation of the Sword of Oath of Victory and the inclusion of Star Breath in it are because, in terms of setting, the Sword of Oath of Victory is the Holy Sword of the Stars. The liberating language of the golden sword that must win is the sword of choice. Give me the strength to shoulder the responsibility of the king, Caliburn. I haven't seen the back yet, I hope it's more rigorous. If you are not sure what to sing, please check fgo or fgowiki.

I didn't pay attention until I read the next chapter. I just turned to the first chapter again. As for Goldfinger, the justice is not reflected much. It is just a heroic spirit template and points for killing people, but it only sells some weapons matching the heroic spirit. I always feel that something is missing.