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Many authors now write about Chinese Americans. I actually don't understand it. In the past, there were very few articles about Chinese Americans, and there weren't that many weird faces. Or just write about foreigners, it doesn't matter whether they are white or black. Everyone understands. Reborn to play in the World Cup, after all, the next life is not this life. But Chinese people have a very bad impression. You either don't play in the World Cup, as a Chinese person, keep your nationality and don't accept call-ups, or you can do like AC Milan and fake injuries. I also think this is a way to deal with it, but Chinese people. The word "Chinese" really feels real, and generally speaking, I think it's too light. Except for a few, very few of the older generation, there are a few patriotic groups, but overall they know everything. Gaohua Gaohua, this Chinese character is very intriguing. Moreover, there are many traitors among immigrants. Real Chinese Americans, to put it bluntly, most, almost all Chinese Americans, are disgusting to write about.
I read a few chapters and saw some problems, so I asked them to look at the author. This is my understanding of sports novels that I have read for more than ten years. If it works, that's the best. If it doesn't, just think of it as a fart. First, can the protagonist not be a waste, or a waste, but please make the protagonist travel earlier, for example, around fourteen or fifteen years old. Although many of us sometimes feel that we are useless in reality, we don't want the protagonist to be like us. Wasteful protagonists are not very popular nowadays. It is best for the protagonist to be in the sports industry with average talent. For example, if the most talented person can go to the top giants to be the main player, then it is best for the protagonist to be the main player in the lower two leagues. In this way, he can gradually upgrade. In the first one to two years, he will upgrade one or two or three outstanding abilities and physical qualities, and help the team to upgrade to the previous level of league. In the future, you will gradually upgrade and change teams. For example, the team the protagonist plays in will be promoted to the secondary league in two or three years, and then transferred to an ordinary team in the top league. After two or three years of playing well, he moved to a giant league club. In a year or two, he will transfer to a top club. If the protagonist travels back in time and is 18 years old, it can be written for five to seven years. The protagonist is only 23-25 years old, and his ability is basically that of a top star. Then he will be upgraded for two and three years, upgraded to the strongest and only one in the world, and then it will basically be over after winning the Hercules Cup Second, it is best not to have an experience card. This thing has been disliked by sports writers for more than a day or two. The experience card thing looks disgusting and is the biggest challenge to readers' logic. Think about it, there is only one super game, and the other games are all super ghosts. What would you think if you were the chairman of the team? Third, can you write about exercise techniques in the dream space and physical exercise in the real world? Is there any way to improve your abilities by adding points? This kind of look is nonsense. Yesterday I could only run 100 meters in 11 seconds, but today I can run 100 meters in 10 seconds. This also looks disgusting. If you want to improve the protagonist, you can do this. In real games, you can increase experience. When you have enough experience, you can upgrade. After upgrading, you can get potential points. Potential points can improve the potential of the protagonist. For example, the protagonist's speed can only reach a maximum of 80. After increasing the potential, the maximum speed can be increased to 100. For example, the protagonist's field of vision or passing can only reach a maximum of 70. After increasing the potential, the maximum can reach 100. Fourth, skills issues. I hope this is the case for skills. For example, the protagonist can increase experience by using them on the field or practicing them off the field. After the experience is full, he can upgrade. However, when experience reaches a certain level, skill-based abilities will still improve. Like Marseille Slalom, the lowest level feature is to reduce interference and confuse the opponent. For example, the feature is to increase the anti-interference by 10% and increase the ability to confuse the opponent by 10%. Then the experience is increased by one-tenth of the current level, the doubtfulness is increased by one percent and the interference resistance is increased by one percent. Then upgrade to the next level, which will directly increase the anti-interference by 30% and the confusion by 30% (you can write these specific values as you see, I am just using an analogy). Written in this way, it can show that the protagonist's skills have been improving through practice with teammates. Fifth, talent category. It is best to upgrade this type of ability by obtaining upgrade points when the protagonist wins a championship or a grand prize. After all, this thing is difficult to obtain, and the improvement is only based on talent. Such as absolute ball feel, such as pace frequency and so on. This is my personal opinion. If you think it is useful, just use it. If you think it is useless, just think of it as fart.
Anyway, it would be nice to have more heroines, but there are not many girlfriends for those who play football.
Be creative, you can combine it with the Premier League hand throwing ball thief who is the best
If a player with 100% Chinese descent led the England team to win the World Cup, I can't imagine how popular he would be in China...
There's nothing wrong with the protagonist being Chinese, but does it have to be Chinese?
Hey, I just commented. Suddenly I realized that the things everyone was talking about didn't make much sense. This football, this country, in fact, the root of all phenomena, everyone knows that when the devil is sitting in heaven, what can mortals do?
The author is a newbie in football. Not to mention that the game has no sense of graphics and is not passionate at all. It is too bland. In the whole article, the only bright spot is the imagination.
For those who are not satisfied with the author's setting, just write one yourself and let the national football team win the World Cup.
Bad news: Portuguese defender Danilo is injured and really wants to miss all the remaining group matches. Good news: Pepe may be on the way. The game against South Korea was great to watch.
In the second chapter, he was persuaded to quit and jumped three meters high? ! The Olympic high jump champion is only over two meters tall. With your basketball system, your upper body has directly exceeded the limits of human beings and rushed into space? !
That great person can write about a football player from Macau or Hong Kong who rises to the altar step by step. To win a trophy in the World Cup, you don't necessarily have to lead your team to win the championship 🥺🥺🥺
I really hate the promotion. Uruguay didn't award the final penalty kick. It's a pity.
😰Is trash talk so awesome? Say one card at a time? Can't they all be fined in those ten minutes? And kick a ball of wool?
The theme of this World Cup is called: The End of Dog Gambling
I stayed up late today watching Germany and Spain. My little life is a bit wandering today.