The Big Devil in the Comic World

Fangcun Aite

I will slowly lay out the Tokyo foodie line and Kaneki's line, so it's slow~ The exchanges between Kaneki's mother (whose name I really can't find out) and Fujioka Mitsuyo are also foreshadowing, but I guess they will be used later... But Touka, who is three years younger than Kaneki (Kaneki is the same age as the protagonist, and was roughly pushed up through the age of Ete and Arima), it is too sinful to think about it...

Also because I take it too much for granted, the so-called fanfics I wrote may actually not be seen by many people, and I focus too much on the reasonableness of the plot, which leads to the neglect of character creation. This shortcoming is really too big. There is also vocabulary and description. Because I am a new author, I need to pay attention to this issue. To put it bluntly, I am too self-satisfied. Some places were completely ignored.

Naru Mizaki and Misaki Fujioka

The comic world I want to write is not simply separated, but the characters I choose interact with each other for some reasons. Of course, this may be different from the original work. The former is really easy to write, and you don't have to think so much. It is almost the same as writing Zhutian, but this is a comprehensive comic 🤔🤔🤔 Is there any problem with the interactions between the characters? No problem.

The author feels that not many people have read this book, probably because the beginning is too complicated. Generally speaking, if you write something at the beginning of a book that interests others, they will continue to read the rest. As for the author's first few chapters, it is estimated that many people will have a headache and quit immediately after reading it. Come on!

Curacao

In my first humble novel, I found some shortcomings myself. The first was the rhythm, and the second was the characterization. I found that many places were not written well. I was also thinking about how well I wanted to write this story. I hope someone can point out the error. Because it consumes a lot of my efforts and is also my obsession.

It feels like the pavilion in front is very large, which is quite interesting.

Damn it, it's still pretty good after surviving the poison at the beginning. That being said, I was a little discouraged at the beginning. It will get better later.

However, the first chapter has a lot of information, so you need to read it for a while. The second chapter is a bit toxic, but it gets much better after that, and you get into the zone.

​​The characters include "Detective Conan", "Tokyo Foodie", "One Punch Man" (it appears later, it needs to be foreshadowed and reasonable, but it is absolutely smooth), "another", "White Night Walk", "The Adventures of Jackie Chan"... These stories are all in my original world, and they will not be out of the ordinary anyway. There are also many original characters, these are an attempt, and, except for Conan and another (but the protagonist entered the school two years ago with the original plot line, this description is basically blank) I will follow some of the original lines, and the rest, very few. It's okay to treat it as a new book... Once you've drawn up an outline, it's very casual to dig holes here and there, and you won't get into trouble with me. As for some works that you haven't seen? It's okay, I will describe it from the side, so you won't be confused 😃😃😃

This writer has few comments, so let me make up the comments.

Come on💪, I am a real person, not a robot.