Something Strange Is Coming: I Am the Boss in the Heavens!

After reading the introduction, I wanted to stop writing about the fifth world Naruto. The previous ones were all biased towards the East. In the later stage, a Western Naruto suddenly appeared. Those who are interested in this are fine, but those who are not interested will probably not read it. After all, your ex-wife relies on Eastern fantasy to write.

After watching it for a long time, I didn't see that the first world was of any use to the protagonist. It was completely meaningless.

Come on, author. It's just that I'm afraid that you, the author, won't be able to grasp the essence of so many novel genres, resulting in readers being screened for each copy. It is better for the author to choose a specific genre and work on it carefully😁

Write to the heavens regardless of the volume, and the chance of being thrown out will be increased by one

The writing is okay, but I suggest you skip the first historical copy quickly. People who like to watch multi-world time travel generally have no interest in this kind of time travel. As a result, the plot basically remains unchanged. Even if you don't want to change the plot, you should add something new to the original world, such as some advanced mechanism techniques, steam engines, etc.

Book title: "The Journey of a Bird in the Warring States Period"

Don't write about Japan. Write about other Western things. They are better than Japanese ones.

After reading, I found that the characters in the article were a bit pretentious in their speech. Although I knew that some of it was to introduce the background of the characters, but one by one, I Zhang San, I won the Si... In addition, the exclamation points one after another made the readers feel like they were talking like a barrage of firecrackers. Occasionally, you should also pay attention to the awesomeness of mythical beasts, right? It would be better to make the protagonist's character more calm.

People who read your book are attracted by the "weird" and "boss" in the title of the book. What they want to see is the imaginative killing methods in the book, the dark style of the protagonist becoming more and more inappropriate, and the fun of the mastermind controlling the puppets and people in the ring through weird methods. But what you are writing now, except for the weird feeling in the first few chapters before time travel, can completely replace the protagonist with a master of martial arts who serves as a charging general in the Qin Dynasty in the Qin Dynasty. It is not classified as fantasy and weird, and it is not classified as a historical novel. It is completely like advertising to take people on tours and bringing them to work in factories. Let me give you some suggestions 1. Add weird elements to it, such as: the protagonist's practice of martial arts requires death caused by war, etc. 2. Reduce the scene where the protagonist charges into battle in the war. Whose boss will personally fight to the death in front of the stage? Even if the odds of winning are 100%, I won't show my sage in front of people who work so hard! The protagonist could have debuted as an idol. He would show his face every time he conquered a city. A bird that could speak human language said that the Qin Dynasty would unify the world. Wouldn't it be beautiful to attack the heart first? In other words, who can be a general or a prime minister? It is also good to be a magic stick who can predict the future! You go to war, and I get the military glory! 3. A weird boss should look like a boss. Those who can teach bad skills should not teach good ones. Those who can teach defective skills should not teach the original version. Those who can trick people must be tricked. If they cannot be tricked, they should be changed into ones that can be tricked. Don't be moved at every turn, which will make it very dramatic. Teach a bunch of skills, and then wait for them to master them, and then wait until they are finished, or absorb them, make them into materials, or develop a clone! 4. How about changing your name? Attract people who like to read historical texts?

Author, I have to say that you are completely wrong. In the Qin Dynasty, there was a destiny struggle for hegemony, and in the Song Dynasty, there were artificial time travellers. The main world is still a Taoist country. Have you ever thought that what you want to write is a weird boss, and what you want to do is to magically transform the world and turn it into resources. In the end, some kind of luck came out. I really... If you go to Tianlong, don't you first read all the martial arts in the world, create the magical skill of transforming into a dragon, and then preach the world and spread the dragon's blood to all living beings, so that ordinary weeds can start to hunt and evolve. Make some sort of time traveler player's house wine...

The historical world can be used as an appropriate place to pass down Taoism and so on, and gather the efforts of everyone to develop ourselves. Otherwise, the purely historical world will look nothing.

Please help me and spend a penny to read it!

No wonder it doesn't take off. Too wordy.

All the descendants of Yingzheng will be short-lived after a long time? The protagonist is going to be killed, right?

Zhu Tianwensheng has written a historical article. The author can directly turn to history in his next book.

Author, sometimes I subscribe to Qidian, sometimes I subscribe to Read Everywhere and Xiaoxiang Academy Red Sleeve Reading

Is the protagonist decisive and cunning in killing?

I don't know what to say about you. It's not that you're not good-looking. You're off topic.

That's it? This author opened a small account to advertise in the historical area. I took a look specifically and it felt like a mindless article. The last dozens of chapters have no titles. This is a very good historical article among other people's novels. It's just that the author made a mistake and tricked people into killing them, right?

I want to see World 4, so I wrote about kicking me

Chapter 6: The author checks to see if he wrote the wrong animal. He mistook the eagle for a tiger.

The writing of the first world was too slow

I suggest you polish it for the next new book.

It is recommended to change the name. The content cannot be said to have nothing to do with the name, but it can only be said to be slightly related.

The writing is still very good. The biggest shortcoming is that it does not grasp the core of what I want to write. It is a bit too wordy and the main line of the article is not obvious.