Hong Kong Variety Show: at the Beginning, the Eldest Brother Asked Me If I Wanted a Wife

He's too novice and has no intention at all. Young and Dangerous always uses guns and treats others as fools.

Accompany my sister-in-law to do her hair and come to report 🪖

I don't understand, why are you attacking the author? Everyone has a process, and not everyone starts as a great master. Come on, author, and try to write 500,000 words. Even if you don't write anymore, it will still be a good memory.

Looking at the introduction, you know that it is most likely to be the arrogant and arrogant style of Young and Dangerous (whether it is a real Young and Dangerous or an undercover one). Recently, several new Hong Kong comprehensive books have been written about this, and I am tired of aesthetics.

You use guns for everything. Do you think others don't use them because they can't buy them? ?

In those days, Lardboy still needed undercover agents? ? Writing blindly

It's easier to ask a little Jew for money than to ask her for your life. She will give you 70,000 yuan? Are you crazy or is she crazy? The author hasn't watched The Big Era and just roughly knew that Vivian Chow had played this role before writing it, right?

If you don't want to listen to anything, if your writing is not good and you don't want readers to comment, will you make any progress? When you're done, send it out to readers

The villains and heroes are too weak-minded and have too little tempers. Sometimes they are inexplicably afraid of the protagonists. Please write more about the inner drama and explain it.

I will translate your comments for you. Boss: Boy, you and my lover are together, I will come to your house for a drink when I have time. It will be good for you in the future.

What do you call toughness? Isn't this a bad character?

What an honorable job this taker did?

When this subject becomes popular, I follow the trend and write, but then I can't write what others feel like.

The plot is the same as many others, the same plot involves getting the sister-in-law, the same plot to kill the big scapegoat, the same plot with the enemy gang taking the blame, but there is no copying and there is something more creative, a gangster, the woman in the family is not a wealthy lady, as for leaving the mistress to the younger brother to get married? Do you think you are Thunder Tiger?

A very bland novel, just average! Not attractive, the writing is okay, but I just don't have the desire to continue reading.

The plot is okay, but the writing is a bit poor

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. I didn't like the character of Inspector Abalone. He was looked down upon too much. This is a lifelong black spot, how to clean it?

To be honest, I don't really like the idea of ​​being an undercover agent at the beginning, and then taking two games at the beginning. Are you screening readers so early?