Please Come Down to Earth After Dark

With the temporary suspension of "Elegy of the New World", Brother Tao said that he had a better idea and was eager to write it down and meet readers. This is a new universe that can connect a poll bureau. I think he did it and it was a new beginning. The Poll Bureau is where every fan of Tao's dream begins. The humorous dialogues, the grounded world setting that is rare in fantasy (difficult to classify) novels, and the combination of fighting scenes with traditional martial arts make this work an extremely alternative existence in the fairy tale genre. There is no Long Aotian, no Mary Sue, no flashy waste of combat energy, and no secondary skill names. There are just some worldly masters who are like the uncle next door, and Liu Bo'er, who is invisible to everyone but has a thoughtful mind. Art comes from life but is higher than life. Brother Tao is a person who is good at transforming fragments of life. He rationally imagines commonplace plots in life to serve the development of his own plot. This is why his books are so fascinating. Brother Tao said that the work he is most satisfied with is "Dark Night is Coming", and the work that can raise the level of "Dark Night" to a higher level is "Elegy for the New World". But the book Dark Night itself has mixed reviews. Those who like it like it very much, while those who don't like it will think it is just average. Therefore, the new world will seem a bit "difficult to enter". If the Super Power series can be regarded as a very challenging special dish presented by Brother Tao for himself and some fans, then the Polling Bureau series is like an affordable banquet in the largest hotel at your doorstep, easy to enter, and of high quality. However, the polling bureau's IP has lasted for more than ten years, which will eventually make everyone feel a little tired. After all, the combat power and class are fixed, and it is difficult for anyone to give everyone enough stimulation. After all, even if someone pokes a hole in the sky, Director Wu, who rolls his eyes, will clean up the mess for you. Even worse, there is Xu Fu who is fishing at sea. What can't he do? And "Please Come Down to Earth after Dark", while perfectly inheriting the core of the Poll Bureau, gives everyone a new world to explore. It can be said that Brother Tao has unlocked a new adventure map for everyone after more than ten years. Unlike Comrade Shen La, who was suspected of being Director Wu's biological son who was not related by blood, he gradually climbed from the bottom to a position where he could be on an equal footing with Director Wu in terms of status. Shen Lian is a man who looks like a dog. The gods saw the hob meat that had been unlucky for three days, but he got into the circle of gods from the beginning. It can be said that those little pretentious things in the polling bureau are not qualified to appear in front of the protagonist. The alternative fairy setting combined with the traditional fairy system, let us wait and see how Brother Tao can make waves in the "ocean of gods".

Chapter 3 is really poisonous. If someone doesn't let you in, you have to go in. After you get in, you won't listen to anything they tell you, and you even kick in the door. It's really your fault. This author's writing is even worse than Xiaobai's 😅

Strong writing skills, interlocking storylines, only things you can't imagine, Brother Tao V5

In this day and age, do people still write first-person online novels? ? ? ? Don't you think you're fighting hard enough?

The beginning was too discouraging, and I had no IQ at all. A man weighing 180 pounds has 200 pounds of bone in his body, but he has to do it in the opposite direction. If others don't let you in, you have to go in; if they don't let you out, you have to go out; if you let others go, you won't leave; if you let them stay, you won't stay. As soon as I saw a stool calling to the old Taoist priest, I couldn't stand it anymore.

To be honest, I can't stand it. The main character is an idiot in the beginning, but I wouldn't know it if I didn't watch the rest.

The protagonist is really disgusting, he has no qualities at all, he only causes trouble, shirks responsibility and punishes others when he causes trouble.

Do you think it looks good? I feel like I spent my money very unfairly. To be honest, New World and Tianhei are not that good. I can't stand New World anymore. The popularity of the live broadcast room is so low that I keep writing like this. . . . I can't believe this is what a pollster author wrote! ! I won't chase you anymore. The above only represents my personal opinion, die-hard fans please stay away.

The protagonist behaves like a very smart person. He tells you not to go out but you go out anyway. He tells you to pretend not to see him and say it directly.

The third golden chapter is about a mentally retarded gangster protagonist. . . . . . . It's still the first person, it's too old-fashioned

The protagonist who is hated by everyone has to use the first person, which makes the beginning extremely uncomfortable Wouldn't using the first person enhance the reader's sense of immersion? But with such a weird character, and then a plot about a wife remarrying and her son having a miscarriage... Shouldn't he be very popular, right? I understand that the author relies on the recklessness and stubbornness of the protagonist to promote the design of the plot, but it is really not likable... Or maybe it is just a personal statement. It was very discouraging at the beginning.

I barely made it to Chapter 10 and completely quit. The essence of the book at the top of the first page is a good advertisement, but it is a pity that the product is not good. There's nothing wrong with the first person, it's just that the protagonist is really good at it. Don't do whatever you are told to do, and do whatever you are not allowed to do. The personality pattern of adults is similar to that of a mentally retarded person. I haven't seen the so-called plot yet and can't stand it anymore. Goodbye👋🏻👋🏻

Now that I have read Chapter 9, I have a very familiar feeling. The author's writing method is roughly the same as the suspense writing method when I was in junior high school a few years ago, but it lacks a little flavor. Chapter 7 should be a foggy mess. The protagonist is so confused that no one believes it, but everyone believes it. He is stubborn and a bit silly.

After reading the previous chapters, I realized that it was all about characterization for the sake of characterization. No matter ancient or modern, who relies on words to make a living is not a human spirit? How can one be as startled as the protagonist? He relies on his words to make a living, but he always insists on keeping his inner thoughts intact, talking nonsense to others and talking to ghosts. How can a person with this kind of business ability and no city government be able to outsource the company's business? Just for fun. It's no surprise that this book is exempt. It's not a question of whether it's poisonous or not, it's a matter of self-pleasure when writing. This is what the author of the self-help article wrote for himself

There's no problem with the personal perspective, and the author's writing skills are adequate, but the plot is really convoluted, and I want to give you a leg up. Why is it that from the polling bureau to now, the protagonists are all kind of useless? The polling bureau can be said to be a human camera. There are no other outstanding supporting characters in this book, but the protagonist is still such a useless person? To say that the protagonist is useless does not mean that he has great powers, which would be boring for anyone to watch. It just means that the plot needs to be crisper. Every time at the critical moment of the plot, Shen Lian acts like a waste. It is not enjoyable at all. It can even be said that he has never been happy. It is really uncomfortable to watch. If it is so disgusting, I have to say a few words to you in the live broadcast room.

It's all good reviews. Next, this novel is purely about killing a weak protagonist. I don't recommend reading it. No, definitely don't read it. If you read it, you will become stupid (ﾉꐦ ⊙quఠ)ﾉ┻━┻

I read three chapters. Why does this male protagonist look like a sb? Tell me what you read later. Is it just an act or is it just like that?

Writing a book is in the first person. No matter how good the book is, you can't read it.

The first person view is too wasteful and laborious to watch. The protagonist is so disgusting that he shirks his responsibility and just pretends to be cool.

After reading three chapters, I was persuaded to quit.

It's well written and has the feel of a childhood story, but a bunch of comments leave people speechless. But nowadays, readers require that the protagonist must be omniscient, omnipotent and lovable, which makes it easier for readers to bring their own boring life fantasy that they can make all the changes like the protagonist. When they see the real stupid protagonist, they become self-loathing and can't accept it anymore.

The author has returned from a trip to the underworld

Ahhhhh! ! ! Updated! ! ! !

I really want to curse, is this the rhythm of starting water?

I'm late, I don't have a monthly pass or anything, so let's get a reward first. Is there a book club?

I still like the thrilling fighting scenes written by Brother Tao, awesome!

Can you understand what you wrote? Such a witty writing style also matches the starting point of signing the contract

👍👍👍Finally here

There are not many ways to write in the first person these days.

Updated again? It stopped suddenly, and it changed suddenly.