Live Forever, Wield a Sword to Shake Mountains and Seas

I just went to ask the illustrator, and an original painting of the main character cost me 30,000... After tax, which scared me! My little heart is pounding~

It's a bit toxic. I originally thought that three words would be enough, but I feel that this is too unreasonable, so let's briefly talk about what's wrong. Writing a book can't go against the natural development of things, and can't break away from the existing characters and scenes, so that readers can be better brought into the situation. Because I only saw the scene of Zhao Kuang entering the door because I was a little bit poisonous, let's talk about this part. 1. The protagonist's emotions are too radical. Here Zhao Kuang is more of acquaintances joking. The text is emotional and atmospheric. The realistic atmosphere created here must not transition to the extremely angry part. This is called the disproportionate emotional concentration. 2. The emotional contrast of the protagonist is too large. Or is it the second time the protagonist enters the door in this scene? The protagonist has a positive emotion. The emotional contrast from extreme anger to positive will be too big, which will make the reader fall off the car. 3. The supporting character Zhao Kuang is so playful when he enters the door. This does not meet the basic requirements of humanistic society. The character cannot go too far beyond the existing story background framework

To the author, um... This book is too contrary to the original version. Today's online articles are no longer the same as those days. Don't pretend to be contrary to the original version. If you want to make money, you have to eat well and write down the feeling of pleasure.

It feels so familiar. Jian Lai + a weak version of Mu Shen Ji. I also read some of the books on immortal cultivation. It reminds me of writing my graduation thesis.

The protagonist is very frivolous, well, to put it bluntly, he seems to be a bit of a loser and careless about life and death, and how did you make this braised pork? This husband's house really has everything.

In the new book period, it is very, very, very important to read. Dear book friends, it's great to read every day. I would like to thank you for this! Those who have recommendation votes can also vote.

I hope you won't disappoint those who love the male protagonist. After all, the male protagonist is an immortal species and has no sense of age difference between others. The boss lady in charge of the wine shop is pretty good. She has all the characteristics. She is born with the immortal species blooming.

The writing is quite good, but I always have the feeling that the ending will be that everyone will break up and live apart until they die.

Can't understand the background. Everyone in the introduction was very impressed. I thought it was a small isolated village. I had the same feeling after reading the first chapter. Then in the second chapter, I played chess with a teacher. The two of them didn't know each other, which shows that the map is quite big. Then it didn't say anything about the world background, and I didn't know whether it was a martial arts practitioner or an immortal or something. Why does the protagonist know that he is an immortal species? What Chen Ergou knew was only after traveling through time. How is it considered an immortal species? Live as long as you can or die without being killed.

The latest chapter, this trend is difficult to handle, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The description of the characters is just right, and the transition between the copy tasks of the article and the main tasks is natural. Book shortage, do you have any good book recommendations? In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go!

The writing is pretty good, unexpected source of food

It's basically the same plot as Jian Lai

It's well written (≧∇≦*) but it's bland and not attractive enough.

Personally, I think it looks a bit like a sword, but the writing power is still a bit weak. It can be seen that it is not too poisonous so far...