The Witcher: Starting with Fel

Not bad

Although evil energy seems to be worthless in World of Warcraft, as it is a warlock, its energy level is indeed high, with corrosiveness, contagiousness, invasion, pollution, stubbornness and chaos all maxed out. It also has explosive and burning attributes, and can convert other energies into evil energy, which can replace most other attributes to release spells.

Author, please ask yourself, if your teacher says three or two sentences without leaving Jie Jie Jie, would you think she is embarrassed? This fart left me speechless and my sense of reading was greatly reduced.

Is the writing too fragmented? ? The first ten chapters were written in a traditional serious wizard style, but later they turned into a spoof and funny style? Do you think it's appropriate to write the Witcher style like this?

I came here to read wizard novels, but what did I see? A stallion is in constant heat, it doesn't matter if he has a harem or not, here's something practical. The author has nothing to write, so he always uses women to make up the word count? No real content

The first part of the book felt very confusing, sometimes it was a cool wizard style, sometimes it was a comedy style, and sometimes it was a short love memory essay, and it switched very suddenly. Before Chapter 40, I didn't understand what kind of protagonist I really wanted to portray, but I couldn't read the rest of it.

It's hard to imagine a wizarding novel with a heroine, a power system that is still evil, and a character that always mutates. It talks about equal exchange. I can't tell when the protagonist has exchanged for equal value. Equivalent exchange is only used by people of the same level or system. Toxic. When I look at the protagonist who joins the demon army and starts the Burning Crusade, I can't see that there is still love between them... How special is it?

It's really rare to find an author who can't afford to play like this

Can the eredar twins be brought out and accepted? Can the protagonist become the new ancestor of evil like Sargeras? Same. Becoming the Lord of the Burning Legion There is also hope that the protagonist is not a spiritual eunuch. I can accept no heroine. As long as it's not a spiritual eunuch. If you are interested, you can talk to Succubus or. As long as various opposite-sex interactions do not affect research progress. This way there is no need for emotional drama {"NickName":"Book Friends 20220922111642573","UserId":395031324}

You don't have to be strong and develop slowly, but you can't be pretentious. I hate this kind of author the most. He even hides it from the readers. I'm tired of reading the book. Since you don't want to say it, don't make any foreshadowing. When I saw the green heart, I gave up.

The protagonist is a time traveler, why is he not mature at all and does the same thing as a child? Can you be more mature later?

Real wizards don't have so many weird settings. The author makes so many weird settings, firstly, for the sake of low word count, and secondly, for the capitalist master behind him to make games to make money. Wizard is a profession that enhances mental power. The stronger the mental power, the stronger the strength. Witchcraft is just the use of mental power in various ways. If a wizard's spiritual power reaches the level of a demigod, he can directly control a planet. His physical body will also unlock the genetic lock with the help of spiritual power, achieve immortality, and even convert material and immaterial materials.

I just like that I don't take the golden finger power for granted. The sober protagonist {"NickName":"Muzi 123","UserId":395031324}

All I can say is that the stitching is rubbish and the ends are not flattering.

A primary school student is also exploring the path of mathematics on his own. I can only say that the wizarding world that has been developed for tens of thousands of years has long been over.

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This ending is something I never expected. It's really awesome.

The sense of fragmentation is too strong. I guess the author used to be an old writer who wrote funny, middle-grade, and passionate novels. Now I suddenly write this kind of more serious novel (wizard novel). To be honest, although the setting has been supplemented, the whole family has certain mental problems, but there is no difference. If the writing style is not changed, this sense of fragmentation will always exist, which will eventually cause most wizard novel lovers to abandon the book. I would like to make a suggestion, either push the entire text to reopen (the most recommended), or overhaul the previous chapters (about 30 chapters), remove the passion and remove the middle two. Who the hell likes these wizarding novels? Otherwise, no matter how good and perfect your subsequent writing is, the ending is basically doomed.

For me, this book would be perfect if Tanasha wrote less.

We are here to read calm and rational wizard novels, not to listen to those stingy literary romance novels about literary youths and Bai Yueguang. Are you going to seek death and life for this woman in the future? Did the woman hurt him due to some circumstances? He still wants to say that I understand your difficulties.

Hello everyone, my name is Muzi Yiersan. I am posting here because I want to talk to you about some important frameworks in this book, and also so that I don't have too many numbers in the book. The key points are as follows: 1. The wizarding world is a world that values ​​knowledge first, so everything that appears in the book will be explained and applied as much as possible based on the knowledge that I made up and borrowed. 2 What everyone wants to see the most is the cheat code of "evil power". It will be interpreted and used step by step by Coles using wizard thinking in the book, instead of just applying it according to the evil energy settings of World of Warcraft that he had seen and played before time travel. This can be seen from the fact that he tried to use evil energy pollution to create demons as soon as he came to Mongladi, but failed! Therefore, we will still use the normal and reasonable Logic thinking of the wizarding world to face such a golden finger as evil energy. The experience of the past life can only be used as a general direction to provide exploration. After all, if a normal wizard encounters something he knows only a little about, will he directly apply the usage he heard? Or will you repeatedly study and refine the usage method? Right, which one is more logical. Of course, this process will not take long, because I also want to unfold the colorful and endless world as soon as possible and tell everyone so that everyone can soar in the world of words together. 3. There will be a lot of Western names used in the book, as well as all kinds of fancy witchcraft. If any book friends are interested, you can try to immerse yourself in the book, and then make up some names and corresponding specific witchcraft yourself, or fantasize about some storylines, or conflict plots you want to see. Post them all to inform this cute new author. Thank you all here in advance!          ，， (Just crowdfunding to write a book, this is the most fulfilling thing I can think of for everyone! Thank you again, readers! )

Something's wrong? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The world background is too big, and the combat power may collapse in the later stage. The author's writing style is good, but I don't like this style of writing. It's a lot of verbosity and it takes a long time to introduce everything. There are also problems with the initial setting. The protagonist's life is completely dependent on the kindness and moral bottom line of others. It can completely make the protagonist a special existence. In order to depict the grand background, the protagonist's qualifications are forcibly reduced, and the interest is directly cut in half. There are too many foreshadowings, and the readers are confused. The subsequent scenes are too abrupt. The protagonist's personality changes too much. He is cold, funny, and benevolent. The most important thing is that he does not see how smart the protagonist is.

If Mr. Sa really arrived in this high-dimensional wizarding world, would he be arrested for research? Or will he be arrested for research?

Diavolo, Sargeras or Amon, who is more powerful?

What is the meaning of 46 pictures? Why do you keep this kind of clown? It's not possible to kill him directly. Anyway, he will only pay 200 magic stones.

There are no limits to imagination, but there is an upper limit to a complete world. So do you want to write fairy tales or myths and legends? For fairy tales, children will not stick to the basics and it will look good. For myths, you need to have a complete world setting. The elements in the Azeroth universe are alive. The big guys are all elemental lords. Mr. Sha is already at the top.

Why do you feel that pig's feet are a pervert?