Card Summoning Starts with Contracted Succubus

It feels okay, but the family background setting and world view setting of the protagonist in the beginning are too lengthy and seem too cumbersome. It would be better if it was done bit by bit. Rather than laying out a bunch of background settings at the beginning, perhaps it would be better to use some of the protagonist's current living environment and character relationships after being teleported, and the rest can be revealed bit by bit, which will make people want to follow it...

How should I put it, it is not a fanfic, but it has the shadow of many game dramas, such as Genshin Naruto and the like. It does not benefit from human traffic dividends, but also adds resentment to casual readers who are not interested in these things.

I don't understand how the protagonist's logic works. He was transported to the present place because of his birth, and then became a criminal without saying a word. Is there any logic in this? And the protagonist still thinks this place is good? Does the protagonist think it's good to sentence the protagonist without saying a word? How does this brain work? The protagonist can actually still work in the country that helped sentence him? Is it still delicious?

Yes, compared to Qidian's other card novels (maybe), the plot and setting are pretty good, so why are there so few people?

Your book has a lot of settings at the beginning. The beginning is not pleasant at all. Where does the protagonist come from and what does he do? What's the purpose? What do you want to do? What are the goals? None can be found. The settings are thrown out in piles, but the plot has no idea what to write. Where does the most basic thing, the protagonist, come from? Any cheats? You haven't written clearly what your purpose is. People reading it will feel like you are babbling, as if you are talking in your sleep, and are completely unorganized.

A capable succubus, or a cunning succubus?

Good guy, the author of this book is really motivated by love.

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It's a bit confusing and I don't understand the training system.

I feel like it lacks a lot of description of the environment, which makes it inexplicable.

After looking at these pictures, it seems that the Card Domain copy should have an impact on reality. The important copy may function as a timeline correction, and the Holy Card Palace may have something similar to record important time nodes and world line disturbances. All card information is also recorded. Are there any reminders for card changes? Will the repaired card world be integrated into the main world later, and all related cards will be liberated😃 After integration, the creatures in the original card world will sign contracts with the creatures in the main world and go to other copies to become cards 🙂

The writing is very good. I just like some heart-warming novels that are not lacking in adventure. I will give you a monthly pass to express my feelings❤

During this period, weren't all the books with succubus in their titles ordered to be renamed? How did this one survive?

The author's settings are pretty good but he doesn't know how to tell stories.

Myths spread all over the place, and gold is not as good as a dog.

Why does Qidian recommend this kind of book to me?

I hope to have a single chapter to introduce some common sense of the training system, such as card positions, bindings, schools, etc.

I'm about to take the college entrance examination, so I read it once a week, but I turned on the automatic subscription. Good luck to the author

I almost finished reading it in a long time. I don't really accept women, just a ghost bride and a flower fairy. It's boring.