Top Comprehension: Start with Basic Boxing Techniques

Do the people in this book have no brains? Things are done in a straightforward manner, without any human intelligence or human touch. The writing is like a fight in the world of beasts. There are big problems with the framework and story logic. The author is still an old author, so the problem with what he writes is so obvious? ?

The author, Qian Lv, is at the end of his rope. I used to keep getting stronger and I could keep watching. Now I have become a weak chicken again. Watching GP is boring. I gave up the book when I saw the corpse open its eyes.

This book is indeed a bit watery. When it comes to upgrading the book, I feel that it is not as well written as the author's previous book, Seed of Immortality, which overwhelms all enemies. I want to see more weird puzzles in the continuation. Hey, the author said that books written seriously are popular, but books that are written by others are popular.

Three Infinite Divine Powers Revealed to Kill the Black Light Martial Saint

I saw a lot of people criticizing this book, but I felt very good after reading it. The protagonist is decisive in killing, but also humane. I can feel that he is dedicated to fighting, has a flexible mind, and has good intentions. Although there are some routines, the plot is not stretched and the pacing is also good. So far, there is nothing bad.

Only a few thousand words a day are not enough.

It's outrageous. Such a talented person has been forgotten forever. The sect does not support the resource allocation. You just keep writing about how fast he cultivates and pretend to be a slap in the face. I'm really tired of watching it.

The biggest failure in the early stage is that the protagonist can create his own martial arts. Since the protagonist can create level 5 martial arts, why not create a huge number of level 1 martial arts to increase his potential? Later, the protagonist still has to go to various places to buy martial arts skills. Isn't this a huge logical flaw?

Both logic and writing have a lot of room for improvement (high emotional intelligence speech)

The starting point for understanding is a bit high. The starting point is 98, which is still mediocre. And just adding a little bit of understanding makes the cultivation speed increase so fast. It's a joke. This book will collapse sooner or later.

The plot has been a bit broken lately. When the protagonist encounters someone he can beat, he will kill him whenever he wants. He is very crazy. This is no problem. But the problem is that when you encounter a master that you can't beat, the master is very reasonable and polite. There is even one where the protagonist provokes first.

Problems started to arise in Chapter 21. The original words were, "Most of those martial arts are blood-strengthening martial arts, which are of no use to Lu Changsheng now." If they are useless, why not practice? Can't add understanding? Sometimes he says there is nothing new to increase his understanding, and sometimes he puts it in front of him and does not practice it. After breaking through the realm, you should be able to continue to strengthen your health. After all, the realms you set later need to be broken through by qi and blood.

The description of combat power is so terrifying, but the Dao foundation is quite a foundation for cultivating immortality. . . . Each of the Immortal Sects is so awesome, but the master of one palace has only reached the peak of foundation building. . .

A Turtle Yuan Disk from a passerby of the same realm can block the spiritual black hole. Is this magic that can bear the fruit of infinite divine passages so rubbish? Your setting is so damn stupid. You even used your trump card to play a passerby. You were so awesome before, but now this? It's a bit disgusting.

You must at least have a principle for your own martial arts. There is only one power and level, which is both empty and embarrassing. You should write down the practice method, usage, and source. Similar to your own Wang Baquan: Practice method, Qi and blood gather in the arms, and the Qi and blood will not disperse during high-speed activities. Usage: Hold tight, the style of play seems to be unorganized, but it forces the opponent to follow the chaos, and there is a way to win in the chaos. Source, street fighting, the murderer has no restrictions on his moves.

There should be less pretentious plots. How can there be so many people who like to eat melons and be enthusiastic people all day long?

One of the best books I have ever read. It changes the map at each stage. The process is the same. Push a few invincibles and then teleport to the next map. Remember it is a teleportation array. Even the description is the same. The teleportation array on the previous map was built by Daojun, and the next one was built by Yuanyuan Ying. It is really a process that loops endlessly. It really makes the reader think that he is a fool 😄

I am a long-time reader of Lao Yue. Lao Yue's famous work, The Secret of the Mage, was originally intended to be completed at that time. I didn't expect the data to be so good, and then it was like opening the Ren Du Second Line. The data increased dramatically. I remember that the original secret of the Master was very dramatic. I have finished the book, but I didn't expect that the chapter of Tianwai will start again. With today's online writing rules, I can only thank Shuangwen and see who can catch the reader's g-spot better. It's obvious that Lao Yue has caught it. Lao Yue wanted to write deeply about the previous books. I tried a little harder, but I didn't expect that it still wouldn't work. Lao Yue doesn't want mindless and cool writing, but the market still likes mindless and cool writing. Lao Yue should keep the flow of writing at a pace that he is good at. If he writes more carefully and uniquely, the results will be better. , The writing is too deep and it is difficult to grasp the direction. The novel is nothing more than a refreshing novel based on novelty. Come on, Laoyue I have read so many books in 2006 that I am familiar with them. The author id has fallen silent Three monthly passes, please support me.

After reading Chapter 177, I feel that there is no point in reading. The whole book is now playing with matryoshka dolls, artistic conception → 10% artistic conception → 20% artistic conception →... → 100% Artistic conception → realm → 10% realm → 20% realm → ... → 100% Realm → Perfection of realms → Perfection in two realms → Perfection in three realms →... → Perfection in countless realms → Fusion of two realms of perfection → Fusion of three realms of perfection → ... Fusion of countless realms of perfection → I don't want to read it later, so I will delete the book today.

There are a lot of people in the comment area who don't know how to criticize. There is no big problem with the quality of the book written by this author. The core is that it is enjoyable. The biggest problem is eunuchs, this book must be cut, I say it. The author of this book must be a eunuch and be cut off.

What is it written about? There is no writing style at all, and the characters have no IQ at all. Just to cheat money

I've been poisoned. Do you understand what I mean?

I've started playing matryoshka dolls, and it's getting a bit boring.

I can't write anything new. Start making matryoshka dolls every day

The subject matter of this book is okay, but the writing is messy, depressing the realm, and damaging to the mind.

A waste of 30 yuan on junk books😒

Seven monthly votes have been cast. It's not too much to add more.

Which idiot came up with the idea that martial arts in the world are fast and unbreakable? What's the use of being fast if you can't break the defense?

The author can't stand his temper when writing books. In fact, the routines of cool articles are similar. At least the author's writing is no worse than the cool article about slaying demons and killing demons in the ranking.

The yin in the moon has become a eunuch, and the sky is about to stand