I Run a Travel Agency in the World of Cultivation

The part about cooperating with the country was too boring. I feel like the author doesn't believe in the country at all. The country will offend you in some way. It's such a darkening of the country, so abandon it.

Is the author male or female? When I saw what the heroine said when she first met the ginkgo tree: I am a woman..., As a modern woman, I felt something indescribable and subtle, hey!

It was pretty good at the beginning, but since I started working with the "other party", I can't stand it anymore. Both sides seem to have been deceived. A stable and huge existence, needless to mention the heroine, must find a way to study the world on the other side, from the air, soil, food, plants, to various exercises, etc. Now they all rely on the heroine as the only channel. It must be to allow the heroine to serve the country and at the same time vigorously support the development of the heroine. Only in this way can there be hope. It is impossible to do so every time. She will use both soft and hard tactics to manipulate the heroine in the name of "protecting her parents." Moreover, all her accounts, phone numbers, and WeChat messages are definitely under surveillance, and videos cannot be posted just as she wants. The writing is not reasonable

It can only be said that it is a pity. The chapters where the heroine communicates with the country are very toxic. I can't stand it anymore. It's so uncomfortable. It's hard to find a cultivation article that suits my appetite.

The author is a part-time book writer, and she is not very young. She is a woman, active in thinking, and full of ideas. Many of the original points in this book are very attractive, such as the soybean man, the possessed traction bean, the opening of pulses and cultivation, and Zhulan picking up meteorites to change her destiny, etc. The world view of the work is also very grand. It is a pity that you are too arrogant and blindly pursue the truth. The pig's feet are also written too ordinary. The heroine is obviously extraordinary from the time when Master Gongsun traveled to the world of cultivation. To the Black Pearl Island. Oh, having said so much, I just think that the author is obviously very creative. The heroine's early creation is also very good. It is obvious that the linkage of the two worlds in the early stage will be very exciting. The wild incense god's mansion in the world of cultivation and the Milky Way. Is there a black hole as big as a peach? The truth about the war between gods in ancient times. As well as the mastermind behind the inertia of the earth's spiritual energy, etc. Why are you still being bullied so much and you are still a foundation builder? ?

Because of my poor grades, I originally wanted to open a new book. I collected 700 of it. A few days ago, I saw an author abandoned the book after collecting 2,200. I also wanted to abandon the book. Then I asked the editor-in-chief if I could write this story from a different angle? She said no, I guess mine is considered plagiarism. She comforted me and said that for a newbie, my grades were not bad. She said that I could be on the shelves, and I wanted to be a V, okay. I thought again of the example that my editor told me before. You must write well, otherwise you will get used to it ~ eunuch miscarriage ~ m9(´∀｀) It's you! Then the editor who recommended me was Dali Huajiao. She is a great person, patient and gentle, and she is not angry with all kinds of stupid questions from a novice like me. From the beginning of the book to now, she has received many recommendations (so my poor grades are the problem of my book). Anyone who wants to write a female video should contact her! You can also contact me, I will give you her email address!

The original setting is good, but the content is not what I like, and the heroine keeps talking about her brother, and her brother completely ignores the protagonist's situation and her safety and only thinks about his interests. I can only say that I don't like it.

The title of the book is very attractive! The beginning is quite interesting, but the plot behind it is not exciting. I find this two-world reselling very interesting, and I also want to see the cooperation with the country But the plot in the beginning is like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long. I read it just because I was attracted by the author's writing style. For this kind of otherworld novel, I really want to see communication with the modern world. There are not a few pictures in the front, but only a few sentences each time. What makes me particularly angry is that the heroine actually put herself in danger just to earn three hundred taels of silver in exchange for meteorites. Let someone teach you how to acupuncture. I almost ended it. I felt that the plot was completely unnecessary, and I wrote 20 chapters. Although it was to introduce the willow tree and the Qiankun Bag, I still felt uncomfortable watching it. I am the female protagonist, and I couldn't bear to let the female protagonist get hurt and put in danger. Especially this kind of illogical plot. I don't know if the author has read "Kidnapping All Humanity". That book is really very detailed, setting up a country to set up a dedicated team to help and mentor the protagonist, as well as the development and utilization of different worlds, as well as the reactions of various countries in reality. It's a pity that the author is a eunuch. The subject matter and writing style of the author's book are very good, but I have only seen 70 plots so far, and I will give a brief summary.

Maybe these two chapters really don't suit you. In this regard, I drew on the examples of overseas personnel returning more than 70 years ago and the current examples of lighthouse countries. They may not be able to keep up with the current national situation. Now I'm asking for your thoughts and I will rewrite these two chapters. Conditions are 1. The country reacts when it is unsure whether Yang Zhao's identity is true or false, and whether her intentions are good or evil. 2. Both sides should echo the reaction of normal people, that is, Long Aotian should be less generous. As long as your wishes are realistic, I will add these two and modify the details of other chapters. Thank you for your opinions.

Very nice! I like this world view and recommend it, but it's a pity that it's tied. I'm going to look for the next good one.

Big Leopard Brother Leopard~~~

The book is well written, good luck to the author! Come on, come on, come on!

It's very interesting and the writing is very original. I really like the author's little imagination.

May I ask if there is a cp? Thanks

When I was young, I didn't know why I wanted to become an immortal. Immortal combat power can be fully realized with modern firepower. After entering society, I only had two words "immortality". As long as I was not a believer in idealism, these two words were fatal. Immortals are all ants. You can point your finger at the wind and clouds, and the palm of your hand is the country. A hundred years later, it will only be a handful of soil.

I tried the AI ​​but it didn't work. It didn't feel the way I wanted it to. I touched a few pictures that I had taken for Nvgoose before, but they were more martial arts. Do you want to add a picture for Zhao Zhao?

My younger brother plays so many roles. I don't know why, but I don't like him.

It doesn't even accept 20% of the purchasing fee for ordinary products, so why bother looking for it? So everything is raised. The author doesn't seem to write about signing a contract with it. It seems that it won't work. I won't read it.

Happy New Year everyone, may the rabbit make great progress!

This book is such a good one, you have to finish it~

Why haven't you come back yet? 😭😭😭😭😭