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Alas, it is suitable for those with a little bit of brainpower, but not for those who read for a long time. Don't be extremely paranoid about the unity of man and nature. The unity of man and nature is useful in the world of gods, gods, Buddhas, demons, science, and magic, but the extreme nature of this character is useful in special situations. Old bookworms should not watch it, but newcomers can barely read it.

To put it simply, it suits my taste But the protagonist's strength improves a bit too quickly And the descriptions of various skills, talents, and golden fingers are a bit confusing Anyway, keep up the good work.

What did the author do next? When did the protagonist become so human? The character of the previous protagonist is to maximize profits, right? Isn't it the protagonist's true nature to be selfish? What the hell is written on the back? There are inexplicable connections between cause and effect, inexplicable kindness, and many plots are written in a hurry and not well described at all. The previous writing is very good, and the details of the plot and character are well portrayed in all aspects. The strength of the protagonist is also unclear, and all the personalities are unclear and messy.

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. You are right if you criticize it. Reasonable discussion is welcome. 1. The dungeon is too fast, so some can be omitted, but the key processes cannot be omitted. For example, the last step of defeating the Dragon God, a great opportunity to show off to others, is skipped? The expectation was completely gone in the end, which greatly reduced my goodwill. For specific methods, you can refer to Wen Chao Gong's novels (except for the previous book "Mysterious Tribulation", his book had this problem, but yours is more serious). 2. If the dungeon is too messy, it can be stitched, but stitching is not inconsistent. For example, the sudden appearance of an Emperor Man in a fairy sword-type dungeon is too inconsistent. Otherwise, like the books of Cruel Toilet Paper Angel ("Magical Race Crossing" and "Dimension Corroder"), all the books are magically modified and full of the protagonist's personal colors, but this requires a huge amount of imagination. Or just combine some similar backgrounds. In short, it is necessary to eliminate the sense of disobedience. 3. The improvement of the character is not obvious and there is no goal. It's like entering and exiting a dungeon machine. I don't know why I entered or what I brought out. It is recommended to give the protagonist a goal. For example, the protagonist of Taibai Shuijun is all about ascending the dimension, or like "This Game is Not Simple" is all about winning. 4. The protagonist's own system is unclear. Here is another example of Taibai Suijun. Although his protagonist's abilities are all kinds of weird every time, he will be integrated into a system in the end. This is very important. 5. It is recommended that the author try not to sew the characters directly. You can copy the map background. This is okay, but copying the characters is very dangerous, because the formed characters have their own definite personalities. If they are not written well, problems will easily occur. It is better to create your own. This is my first time writing a long review. I may not write it very well. I hope you can bear with me. If you have different opinions, we can discuss them together. The books mentioned above all have their own problems. I hope the author can absorb the advantages and not the shortcomings. There is no pushback in all the examples, you are right if you spray.

Bad news: Stitch monster Good news: All stitched

I feel like I've read 20 chapters, like I've read 200 chapters

It's the first time I've seen this type of thing. It's so weird.

I don't understand, where did the 100,000 experience points at the beginning go? It showed that he had used a little experience and fighting skills, and then he took a look at the skills and said there was no rush, and then it was gone? No experience left?

The author's writing style seems a bit familiar! Have you written novels elsewhere? Is this you?