Hunyuan in Destiny, Running Rampant in All Realms

The author has carefully set up the pig's foot character, and the story line (the growth of the main characters and the discovery of the secrets behind it, the story behind the Yinxian's destiny growth, Hunyuan fossil creation, monkeys, Cyber ​​Journey to the West and the Gods) also has the potential to be explored The short-term is reasonable The plug-ins are reasonably arranged and used But the writing power generally leads to insufficient decryption pressure, the characters are relatively flat, the plot transition arrangement is rough, and the routines are common, resulting in the book losing part of the score. If you like it, you can click to take a look. Come on, author! Looking forward to your next book.

I am grateful to every living person. One day I will become platinum, and you will also be a legend 🙂

When an NPC told you that there was a mandrill, the first time he said it, you thought it was a joke, just to scare your little friends. OK, I held back. The second time when someone officially told you about it, you still laughed. You thought it was a scary story. If you really think about cursing people, you will lose your brain in time traveling, right? If you were really a foreign teacher, I would have endured it. I thought I had overlooked it. There was a memory blockade and brainwashing. I did not see this process. The problem is that ×× doesn't have it! As a world traveler, your memory has not been blocked. Such outrageous things have happened. You still have an investigation mission, and the mission specifically states this. And from the previous article, it seems that this system does not have the habit of deliberately setting traps. I also wasted a question to make sure that this is not a game, people will die, and people will squat back to the city point after the mission is over. The character in the front is a hard worker, unafraid of fear, strong in body and mind, meticulous, cautious and calm, etc.? ! Can you withdraw cash here? Is it still okay in the front? At this point in your life, I just want to slap you twice in the face to add some color to the smiling face of the pig's feet. Isn't this the supporting character in a horror movie who sees everything and still believes there is no ghost? You are not optimistic, you are stupid! I'm convinced Others are OK just for this inexplicable anger. Speechless.

Writing about that woman is really poisonous. I suggest you just write her off for not being strong enough.

No, when did I kill Tu Yan and when did Yuntianhou come to a kind book friend and call me, since I joined the Yuntianmeng plot in the first few pictures, I really feel sick when I see this character appear. Other than that, the writing is really good.

I read more than twenty chapters, and I only have one feeling: the protagonist has no brains

It was well written before. It was disgusting to write about joining the Yun Gong League, especially the woman. It was so disgusting. Can't watch.