Hogwarts Mystic

The authors of TouTie all like to give the protagonist a Chinese name in their Western fantasy novels👍

I feel that the author's protagonist setting is up to standard, but I always feel that the author treats magic as a hot weapon, without reflecting the mystery of magic and playing with the rules at all. You can take a look at my evaluation

It feels like I've been writing the plot all along, just adding a protagonist and a fish.

The start is okay, I hope the subsequent story will be more exciting. Instead of following a group, creating a new main line will not only test your imagination, but also require writing skills.

I feel like it's not written out how strong the protagonist is.

A new "Muggle" freshman knew that there was no problem with the Room of Requirement because he was a time traveler. However, when he went to the Room of Requirement right after school started, he met the principal and directly told him to go to the Room of Requirement to practice magic. Then Dumbledore, a shrewd person like him, didn't even suspect it.

It's okay, but the main character is mediocre, doesn't have much of a Hufflepuff feel, and doesn't have any sparkle.

The author should stick to his own ideas, the plot is still good

What would happen if the wand was made into a Horcrux?

Death Eaters can fly, don't they? Let Snape teach you how to fly, and Avada, let's learn!

If the soul is separated, why don't you just resist Avada and eat the big melon?