Zhutian: Starting from Fatty Wang

Being a fat guy doesn't suit my handsome appearance.

You said that it's okay for you to go through and complete the mission, and pick up the heroine and the partner to open up a harem. But your main mission from beginning to end is for the heroine, the partner, these women, and I'm convinced.

To be honest, if you didn't watch the tomb robbing part, you know. When I saw the 4 sisters, I felt like I was rubbing my IQ on the ground. It was the Song Dynasty, not the Qing Dynasty. They had a strong character at that time, and if the Song Dynasty had not been occupied by the Yuan Dynasty, the Song Dynasty was the closest to the capitalist society, not the Jurchens who had just entered the feudal system from slavery.

I feel that my outlook on life is extremely incorrect. After entering, he married Yingzi and went to find another woman. That era was not as poisonous as it is now.

I feel that since I went to Northern Qi, I have opened up the two channels of Ren and Du and found my own style. What I wrote before was very reluctant. After I arrived in Northern Qi, the style was obviously different in terms of writing style and plot. It became more and more sexy, and it was also reasonable and reasonable. The blessings are getting better and better. Don't be a eunuch. Come on come on.

The writing is okay, take your time, but there is really no need for women to accept everything. Today's readers are relatively more mature than before. Really, there is no need to play with women just for the sake of collecting. It is not fun to watch, and it is even a bit disgusting.

It's a pity, it's all about soul travel, and there's no sense of immersion. Even if it's a harem, it's not that interesting anymore.

The first dungeon is really bad. He just married a girl from the village, and the next day he went to harass Shirley Yang. Just because the two of them swore some vows to live and die together, Shirley Yang got out of bed with Fatty and called him a good guy. He is faster than a little butter and is not illogical. Forget it and jump to the next dungeon.

There is really something wrong with readers these days. They have a lot of things to do. What's wrong with the film industry? Are you following the plot? A few people feel happy if they don't attack the heroine 😃

I feel like the characters in the plot are a bit mentally retarded

Tomb robbers suddenly changed into ancient costumes, which gave people the impression that they were suddenly eunuchs.

The protagonist's personality is not likeable, he is worse than the original Fatty Wang! Novice writers will make this mistake. The protagonist's character is gentle at best, mediocre at worst. There is nothing wrong with being mediocre, but it is too weird to put it on the protagonist. Fatty Wang calls Jinya "you" and "Master Jin". It is better to call him "Old Jin"!

After seeing 16 photos, I can't stand it anymore. If the protagonist is not married and flirting with girls, I can accept it. But if you are already married and flirting with girls, it's really speechless. It feels like a stud novel. Anyway, I personally don't like it very much.

Can you please change the name? I'm so confused. . Li Yunlong: Wang Er, the name is such a damn talent!

I just like women who don't have ink stains! ! !

I would like to give a big apology to the author I am a bookish guy and I didn't read your novel carefully, so I complained a bit too much in the chapter. After being corrected by a book friend, and after reading it again, I realized that I made a mistake in making the comment, so I feel a little sorry for it, so I would like to deeply apologize to the author! I won't be like some people who don't admit their mistakes, mistakes are just mistakes! I hereby apologize to the author!

They're all pretty good. Who can I get a copy of, Julie?

If you don't use your brain, you can watch it. The protagonist's IQ is lower than the normal level of human beings. He is too mentally retarded.

The requirements are not high, just enjoy watching it, preferably with more pictures 😜😜😜

It started in the first person and suddenly changed to the third person. I suspected that this was a book written by AI. Yishui's vernacular

Disgusting character, I can't stand it anymore

In the second century, the writing is really rubbish, and girls are also given away. Not many people read this novel, bye bye

You don't have brainless fun, and you don't have clear social awareness either. You are just confused. It got worse in the later period. My writing became worse and worse. I wrote as I pleased and had a lot of bad sentences.

You let me down after all. In "Celebrating More Than Years", you knelt down and licked Fan Xian for no reason. You ignored your own woman.

It's not easy

The scolding is so harsh... According to the standards of a novice author, this book is qualified. There are many fan authors who have written several books, but this one is still not as good as this one.

Was this written by a primary school student? Fan Xian has another father? Li Yunrui, no matter how crazy he is, it's because Fan Xian is closer to you than you are, and then he does everything for Fan Xian, and let astringent feelings fly everywhere. Is the author's family like this in reality, he doesn't love his own people, and he is busy with a stranger?

It's too open, it's not interesting at all

I still like the old baby😜

The tomb robbing chapter was a bit interesting, but then I suddenly let myself go, banging my head here and there, I don't know what it was about.