My Doomsday Survival Is Simplified into a Text Adventure Game

Why do these kinds of novels rely on selling water to obtain resources? It's so shady that I can't think of other things.

The writing is quite good and interesting. But there is a slight flaw. The place of birth is in the ruins, and it is convenient to obtain runes, which can be regarded as a reserve for the male protagonist. But it's too false to write that she only trades with the male protagonist. Runes are in short supply for everyone, but food and water are not exclusive to the male protagonist. The male protagonist has a lot of stock, but that does not mean that others will not have it. There will always be some masters who can get some stocks that satisfy themselves beyond food and drink, but they cannot trade on such a large scale with the male protagonist. So compared to the male protagonist, the advantage over this girl is not that great. She has other choices. Therefore, it is reasonable to create other difficulties to force her to only choose the male protagonist. Moreover, the possibility of installment trading is too small. Either add a setting in the system and choose to be supervised by the system, or don't show up. Even if you give it, why should the counterparty trust you? It is better to order more things at once than to pay for your character in installments. The second is Hei Xiaohu. Since I chose to give it the identity of a player, it has the ability to improve itself without being attached to the male protagonist. And there is a vague competitive relationship (in the past, there was no need to hurt the male protagonist. First, it could not do it. Secondly, it had to be supported by the male protagonist. Now that he has an identity, he can explode the treasure chest by killing the male protagonist, and he can gain upgrades and increase his strength by killing other races to catch up with and surpass the male protagonist. He has a certain strength in itself, and he can also explode treasure chests to obtain survival supplies). Then it is no longer enough to maintain a relationship based on pure emotion. It is not safe. There needs to be a contract or something to ensure that it will not betray, and will not secretly hide the equipment crystal runes that players can use to themselves, to ensure the loyalty of the male protagonist first.

There are a lot of typos, please pay attention to them

This novel is no different from others of its kind. The buying and selling of resources is still so dark.

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

It's quite good-looking and very attractive, but there are too few updates. Very few people will read novels with few words directly.