Sorry, I'm Born with Supernatural Powers

The subject matter is good! But I feel that what you write is written in your own mind, and readers sometimes don't know what you want to express.

I just call it good guy. This is a montage of all the martial arts TV series and novels I watched when I was a kid. It's quite interesting.

Good guy, although the protagonist has a good outlook on life and the story is exciting, why do I feel that all the female protagonists in previous novels are equal to the female Aquaman? . .

This protagonist is simply a scumbag. After all, someone who has called you Senior Brother for half a month doesn't care about others at all.

Although it is stitched together, there is nothing poisonous about it overall. The protagonist has an online IQ and is decisive in his actions, which is not bad.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง It's really beautiful

Congratulations ^_^♪ for signing the contract

You've invested, so work hard(ง •̀_•́)ง

The setting is good. The protagonist doesn't practice any magical skills, just Zhang Sanfeng's, and then relies on divine power and the peacock feather. Judging from the situation so far, the author should look down on the Jiuyang Magic and Beiming.

This protagonist is simply a scumbag. After all, someone who has called you Senior Brother for half a month doesn't care about others at all.

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The pace is too fast and chaotic. Map after map becomes increasingly difficult to understand.