Online Games Are Cut Off in Two Pieces

It doesn't matter if you are big or small, you can talk for two or three chapters all day long, it feels very cool.

The author doesn't like to use punctuation. I almost choked after reading one sentence. Please divide it into a few more sentences.

Without feedback on reality, there won't be much sense of expectation.

I want to watch martial arts online games, but you...

I always feel that the character's IQ is not online

The creativity is quite good, and the plot arrangement is quite reasonable. It just lacks hard skills such as writing experience and so on. Now it feels like reading a running account.

It would be better to make the protagonist a native, and you won't see anything about him being a modern person.

I can't see the tone of the novel, it feels like it was written by a storyteller

I hope everyone will support me when writing new books. If you have any suggestions or good ideas, you can tell me 🙂

It feels a bit like an old book from the past, Online Game Virgins

Talent upgrading requires 0/1000 experience points. Once triggered, 1 experience point will be added 😁😁

The book is good, and it will get better and better later on.

It feels so deserted here, brother, I came here just to show my support 😁

The rabbit dies and the fox is sad, and the heart is filled with sadness

It would be better if it was written as a global survival stream

So deserted? Buy some comments

Do you want to strengthen your son? It's so good.

To practice swordsmanship, why not use bees instead of flies?