Sacred Tree Totem: Rebirth Desert Tree

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First meeting: 8 points Meeting the Xuan-level monster: -0.5 Meeting the foundation-building sand bandit: -0.5 The sand bandit discovers an oasis + the protagonist builds a foundation and a bunch of thunder disasters: -2 Evaluation: Liangcao To be honest, everyone is living in a very depressed current social environment. Recently, this kind of deliberate creation of tension and crisis The plot with a machine atmosphere is becoming more and more unpalatable. The author can look at the rankings of the book. It happens that there are a lot of dangerous enemies around, and the protagonist is about to be discovered. It happens that the protagonist can break through the realm before the enemies come. It happens that the protagonist breaks through the realm and is different from ordinary people. Various tribulations make the protagonist fight for his life to survive, and there are more than ten chapters describing it. Basically, this kind of writing is almost extinct now. It is really rare. The main reason is that these few coincidences of yours came together, and it was a proper way of writing in the style of Long Aotian, the master of abuse. After you break through the realm, the number of people who scold you when you find bandits and monsters will probably be reduced by half. Even if you break through and write dozens of chapters, as long as you break through after it is released, it will be a little refreshing. There is no need to write a bunch of elements and pile them together, it is more enjoyable to think of them as a whole. These elements can be laid out later and written bit by bit. The farming and cultivation flow can also be read by many people. For the bigger ones, you can take your time, write slowly, and lay the groundwork. After all, you are only in the new book period, and the protagonist is still a tree. Time goes by.

I have already cultivated the world, practiced Qi, and built foundations. Why is it classified into the fantasy category? . .

I look at trees, not people

What does it have to do with it? It's been on the list for a long time.

Ask the author, are there only five major realms in your book? Wouldn't that be a little less? Other novels are guaranteed to be nine, how long can you write with these five?

He only wrote about his family, but he also engaged in a lot of sadomasochism and dog licking. None of this man is dedicated to seeking the truth.

The writing is okay, but I don't like the dream transformation. It's better to just use the talent of dreaming to create a dream world or a cave at a low price. Only the spirit can enter it. Everything in it is transformed by the spirit, and the dead can be brought to live in it.

There is a thunder calamity in building a foundation, and I have written more than 10 chapters. It is systematic and useless, just like an ordinary mortal family cultivating immortals! Very depressing!

After reading a few chapters, it will bear fruit. Good guy, I hope the protagonist becomes a girl.

It should be the law of the dark jungle. When I was weak, I would kill people when I saw them. After all, I can't run away now. For example, Lanruo Temple, now both of them are fern-rooted and are trying their best to contact humans.

Author, if you don't write Mu Yiyao to death, then don't write this book. That's really poisonous.

The monthly tickets have been given. Thousands and ten thousand years, the changes and progress of the entire population, economy, military, and system of the Mu tribe are what readers who like farming should watch. Don't ignore the advantage of the longevity of the sacred tree. If the golden elixir is really produced in a hundred years, it is really not worth seeing. There are many novels about single-player development, and this one is not missing. For the sake of the development of the plot, many ore resources are discovered in one generation, and there is only one life in the novel. In order to "reasonably" become stronger, many opportunities must be arranged for the protagonist. I don't understand. In many novels, all good things happen to the protagonist. The protagonist is really lucky, so I like to read novels with cheats, but don't be too strong with cheats. If they are too strong, they are not worth seeing. After all, you can do it yourself. There are no novels without cheats. For those novels without cheats, I think luck is the biggest cheat. Why can someone with ordinary talent and ordinary qualifications still become a strong person? Isn't it because he has very good luck? So when I read novels, you have to have a golden finger, but if your thinking is different from ordinary people, your writing is very reasonable, and you don't have the opportunity to force it up, then it is also very good. I have read at least 10,000 novels [referring to the three golden chapters]. Writing is the most important, plot creativity is the second most important, and the rest is minutiae. Now every time I spend seven or eight hours, I can't find a reasonable novel. This is very uncomfortable. [No rebuttal accepted]

I can only say that the protagonist is too arrogant. If it weren't for the protagonist, he might be g-ish.

I wanted to invest and found that the updated word count didn't allow me to read for ten minutes.

I specially gave two points to comment on it. Some things are really unpleasant to express. After reading Chapter 15, what kind of short-stringed thing can talk to oneself and say all the psychological things? Talk to yourself is often incomplete and jumpy. Because I have many things in mind. Your narration to yourself is so uncomfortable, just like a mental patient.

Chapter 15 of a foundation building,,,, just ask the author what he thinks Development articles are not for you to do this.

The author is teaching readers to cultivate immortality. Water is like a river, and life is endless.

When Yun Mu was born in the dream, his name could be unified. After a while, after a few days, he came back to life.

There are not many novels about trees, but there are still some. It's just that most of them have various problems during the writing. They have IQ to operate, some have problems with their positioning, and then they are all gone.(▔,▔)ㄏ. Wanling wrote that he was kidnapped and tied up when he wrote about his position, and then he was scolded as a saint. Some system settings and realm settings crashed if they were not done well. Some people write that all spirits are in the water, but the protagonist becomes an NPC on the set. There is no priority, and there is no sense of experience or immersion. There are only a handful of issues that have been answered, I hope this book is okay (´ ▽｀). My personal feeling when writing about Wan Ling is that "Lord of Wan Ling" is a good-looking book, and it is the beginning of a new era. The following are some novels about trees that I have read. Some of you may also recommend them (ʃƪ ˘ ³˘)/ I can transform into all things/ I am a legendary boss/the protagonist is a human. The tree in the later stage also has great highlights. Rebirth as a tree/Although it looks like a eunuch, you can still take a look and enjoy it. Rebirth into a tree/A very old tree repair novel. Although it is out of date now, it does not hinder my love for it in the past. Evolution from the Big Tree/A very pure novel about Shuxiu and Wanling. I stopped reading it later and I don't quite remember how it sent me away.

The primary and secondary parts are really too long-winded.

The setting of this non-human protagonist is more attractive, but I feel that it is a bit indifferent and the point of enjoyment is not obvious. When the protagonist is building a foundation and passing through the tribulation, the grinding is too exaggerated. From the perspective of the future, there is no need to think about it, and some sentences appear repeatedly, grind when it feels good, repeat a sentence when it is cool, all roads lead to Rome, and many roads are not so easy to walk, 😋

Author: Don't you have anything to write? 10 Or so pictures. What are you writing about? Save them.

Isn't it to protect all spirits? Why hasn't it taken so long to create a monster race?

I've read about 10 chapters, and it's pretty good. Why are my grades so bad?

You know

Well written, good luck to the author

Don't have the latest map? There is only one map. Where is the location of the prefecture-level oasis?