Duke of Mystery

When I read Chapter 17, I realized that the book has a lot of problems, including logic problems. Pig's Foot has traveled through time for a year. He doesn't understand anything, and he doesn't ask anything. He doesn't trust others, whether he believes in his own family, books at home, and housekeeper at home. He doesn't ask anything, except for food and drink. When you meet a strange organization, you should join it because you think the organization can give you knowledge. Aren't you afraid of the evil god of Yaozi? Who comes from a top noble family and needs to work when he is short of money! The old police chief in the city! He doesn't even know who owns the manor in the suburbs. Is this police chief mentally retarded? The pig's trotters were intimidated by the police chief with just two sentences. You agreed to the request honestly. How about you, a noble family? Your children are not scared by the police even after a few words! Chapter 17 did not develop the world view, and the author felt that he was just foreshadowing. I just felt that it was stinky, long, and pretentious. I have told many authors that you must first be able to write a story and then play with techniques. It's great just watching you narrate the story in reverse order. Here's the story! Goodbye, 88

I saw the aristocratic background at the starting point, and then this background must be a trap. Not only does it not help at all, it is also harmful to the pig's feet in various ways, and even kills the pig's feet. It is all standardized.

Li Zai Gan is the devil? I haven't gotten to the point for a long time. I've been traveling for a year and I don't know anything. I've been writing for so long and it's dull. There's no plot that attracts me. I can't stand it at all.

In fact, the part about the protagonist entering the mysterious world is not very good. The protagonist knows almost nothing about everything, and then chooses someone who doesn't look so dangerous to go in. Then what about the protagonist's family? What happens next, if he is discovered by the family or William, can the protagonist survive?

1. The protagonist in the first three chapters is all complaining, damn it has almost become a mantra, I can't see the character traits of the protagonist at all The following is my subjective opinion 2. You may have some misunderstandings about the word slow-burning. After 7 chapters, I thought a new system would appear, but the result is still mysterious and extraordinary. I am not saying that this system is not good, but other books have developed this system well enough. I can figure it out just by seeing these words. You can just expand it directly. There is no need to write so many meaningless chapters 3. Was the protagonist an actor before time travel? Faced with the housekeeper who lives with him, the veteran police officer who has been living with him for decades, all the extraordinary people are acting, and no one has noticed it yet 4. The sense of gap is too great. You wrote the protagonist's family as mysterious and powerful, but suddenly they were so poor that they had to go out to work, and an extraordinary person suddenly appeared to promote pyramid schemes for the protagonist. The protagonist really dared to go. The most basic extraordinary knowledge needs to be obtained from other extraordinary organizations, and the name is still a bad name like Liming. If it is to advance the plot, it will be too forceful. If you want to take it slow, write it more rationally.

The author opened the book three times, don't read it, just run away

I think I can stock up first and just throw them on the bookshelf. There are only a few dozen at the moment. Who knows if there will be eunuchs in the future. I usually wait and see for new books like this. Who knows if the author will be eunuchs? There are many new authors running away. When will this book have more than 100 chapters, I will take a look.

The writing is good and can create a nineteenth-century Victorian flavor. But there is a lot of nonsense and there are problems with the plot structure. Unless the setting is very brilliant, there is no need to be mysterious in the early stage. To learn mystery, it is best to imitate his structure rather than imitate his meticulous writing habits. For the true original Victorian style, you can read "The Complete Works of Sherlock Holmes". Conan Doyle's creation of the Victorian era is not verbose at all.

The beginning is so decadent that I can't watch it.

It is recommended that the author writes 100 chapters before uploading

The writing is great, and the translation style is really amazing! However, the plot is too slow and a bit scattered, and the setting is not clearly explained, which makes people a little confused. Of course it won't work just like a manual, but at least you can give the reader a general impression, instead of not being able to figure out the basic situation and power system of the world after forty chapters. Overall it's not bad, I hope the author can stick with it.