Special Troubles of Rebirth

Let's take stock of the poisonous points of this book (as of Chapter 400): 1. There are too many women, to what extent. Let's put it this way, in a group with a scale of 100 billion + more than a dozen subsidiaries, the executives are all women and not a single man. In addition to those inside the company, there are many women outside, and most of them are written very casually. They are dispensable characters and do not contribute to the main content. 2. The character of the protagonist is cautious at best, and a bit bloody at worst. There is no sex at all; the chairman of a group that owns 100% of the shares worth hundreds of billions, has donated billions, and created jobs for millions of people is like a piece of dough, said to have a golden body. Your golden body is gold-plated, right? Anyone can step on it and take revenge. You have to do it secretly, not daring to be discovered. You know that someone is going to mess with you, but you have to wait for someone to do it before you dare to fight back. A second-generation character will kill the protagonist after dozens of chapters, and they only officially break up after almost 400 chapters. He has become a pig after constantly messing with him. The corner's counterattack all relies on connections. With so much money in hand, it's almost like paper. When you see the second generation of Quan, you have to call me brother. I remember that when the protagonist's assets in the book were less than one-tenth of the protagonist in the whole book, he criticized Liu Chuanzhi in front of his face. The protagonist of this book really has no blood at all. There was a conflict, and the secretary (who is also the protagonist's woman) was slapped. I thought that I could see the protagonist pretending to be 13, but who knew that he was taken away with just a few strokes, and those who saw it wanted to vomit blood; the protagonist who was the first to harm him in the previous life left his hometown, and his mother's glasses It hurts to cry. The main culprit of my father's depression is that he paid the price of a company (his family has several companies) and continues to be his rich second generation. I can only say that it is awesome, the protagonist is really a saint; there are many examples, I really can't feel happy even if I want to.

Why do you still smoke after you have been reborn... I am very disgusted with people who smoke

When I saw short videos being made in 2000, I lost interest. After a gap of more than ten years, the network environment simply cannot support the popularity of short videos. We have to wait until mobile devices are popularized and data charges are reduced before short videos can appear.

I read more than 200 chapters last night and I can't stand it now. Originally, the character of the protagonist and the business layout were all to my taste, and the writing was okay. The only problem was that there were too many women. Almost every time a female character appeared, she would have a relationship with the protagonist. Once or twice was okay, but it was boring if it was too common. I also like multiple female protagonists, and I can still flirt with girls when I'm in love. But four or five female protagonists can write a whole book. Too many and each character has to be taken care of, but no character's image can be fleshed out. It's a pity that I come across a rebirth novel that I like.

Gold body, what's the use of telling me? Is there any difference between the presence and absence of the golden body in your article? I hang out with some second-generation people every day, but I don't communicate with a few first-generation people. I don't have any power or influence. I dare to mess with you as an individual. For big things, I have to rely on others. Counterattack depends on the memory of the past life. Without memory, I have no ability to resist. A fox pretends to be a tiger.

Forgive the logical brain of a man in science and engineering. The early stage of this book is indeed relatively dull. The author also wanted to write something more exciting, but I really feel that the protagonist does not dare to be too adventurous in the early stage. It is too easy to capsize on a small sampan at the beginning of his career. It's not a brilliant article, it doesn't have system support, and if it wants to be frivolous, it must at least be logically consistent. As the protagonist's career starts, some exciting plots will gradually be described in the business competition. There are some foreshadowings in the early stage, which are inconspicuous and will be used later. I am working on my manuscript, and it will explode later. Thank you to the readers who like and support this book for putting up with my obsessive-compulsive disorder.

Personally, I feel that Dai Rong's character design is not as successful as Wei Yutong's! Dai Rong lives in the main palace, but his virtue is not worthy of his place!

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The writing was originally very good, but the role of the ex-wife is too confusing. The protagonist is a person who often sleeps with 90% beautiful women. How can he still fall in love with an ordinary, slightly pretty ex-wife? To take a step back, the protagonist has feelings for his ex-wife and never forgets his ex-wife. The ex-wife could have a small home and a warm family, but the protagonist makes her become one of many women. Does this mean he has feelings for his ex-wife? How much hatred is this? Ever since this character came out, I didn't really want to watch it. Later, I just couldn't stand it anymore. Goodbye!

Seeing that the protagonist is looking for too many women now, it's understandable that he is just taking advantage of the situation, but the protagonist is raising one from the last one. Is this because he has never seen a woman before? Moreover, raising a woman means buying a house, a car and giving away property. Their parents didn't buy them a house or a car, and their relatives didn't take them with them. They just gave them 1 million and that was it.

The author's economic system collapsed! The price of milk tea is too high. In 2003, CS was already available for shooting games. It seems that the computers in Internet cafes at that time could not carry CF games.

I don't want to complain about other plots. The protagonist is already a business tycoon. He is afraid of a second-generation official. He can't do Tai Chi. The European Army is nothing. He can't kill him. It's a bullshit plot. It's a plot from ten years ago.

The matter of dropping out of school was more than ten years ago before I was reborn. I still can't let go of it. I feel pain in my heart when I recall it. I don't dare to go home yet. I can barely understand it in Qingbei or 918 215. I can't let go of even three broken books. It's very frustrating.

Is this what you've been holding back for half a month? It has always been about Lao Liu. Lao Liu is not a rival at the same level as you. According to the valuation of the engine, which is as famous as Baidu and Tencent, it is worth 20 to 30 billion U. S. Dollars. His net worth is not even a fraction of yours. He wants Lenovo shares? Does he have money to buy it? This 1.3 Billion is not wasted, it also has growth potential, and it is not a loss at all. Why is it so complicated to deal with someone who can kill someone with one hand? Zhang Yiming also keeps a low profile. Why don't anyone dare to mess with him?

Making some disgusting old routines is why I can't stand it. I didn't even get through the free chapters.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but it's a little disgusting to have so many Yingying Yanyan in the past life wife. The prefix is written in such detail, saying that they didn't let her live a good life, but later hooked up with two younger ones. Either you don't write about the friendship with the wife in the previous life. Since Ai Ai has written about hooking up with three people, it's disgusting. This is one thing in front of the person and another behind the scenes. Also, the disciple in the previous life was deceived so miserably in the previous life. The mud man has a three-point spirit. In this life, he is under his own control and can still see through it. I am really convinced.

After reading Chapter 70, all the characters appearing in Chapter 70 are handsome men and beautiful women, but the main character is ugly. I don't know what the author thinks. It's like an orc has entered the elves' den.

I've read dozens of chapters, and overall it's okay, but there's one thing I don't like! That's the emotional line! In recent years, there are actually two mainstream lines of urban gangster romance. The first is to have a kidney, not a harem, but have multiple female protagonists, don't talk about relationships, only talk about money, and then focus on the career line! The second one is heart-warming, with a single heroine and pure love stories, and dual heroines and ambiguous stories (double is already the limit of this type), where the emotional and career lines go hand in hand. This article is about trying to get rid of the kidneys and trying to get away from the heart. As a result, the kidney-takers look awkward, and the heart-takers look disgusting, and both sides are unhappy! It's still a setting problem, I hope you can work on the next one!

I hate writing about finding a wife from my previous life!

First of all, it is too procrastinating. It is predicted that there will be a climax in chapter 400, but it will only happen in chapter 600. It is too trivial. Secondly, the chronicle, the places that should be written in detail, such as CCTV interviews, HK business wars, smartphone launches, etc., Are basically covered in half a chapter. These are all climax scenes of drinking and drinking, and the writing is not as good as having a meal with a woman. There is no need to write in such detail and detail. Once again, there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain. Needless to say, there are many women, and the Holy Mother. Many people feel the same way.

To be honest, before the protagonist was reborn, he was just a little person who suffered severe beatings from society. Where did he come from so many nonsense sentiments (earthquakes, donations to build schools) that were made out of nothing? This piece of writing is disgusting.

There are too many points deducted for the heroine Dai Rong, mainly because she has too many things to do (~_~;)

The milk tea shop sold 6,000 cups a day. I couldn't help but complain. 6,000 Cups divided by 12 hours equals 500 cups an hour. Are there 6,000 people around the milk tea shop on an ordinary day? Don't you all go to work and queue up to buy milk tea? Without crazy advertising, does anyone know that the milk tea shop is open? This writing is so outrageous that I really can't stand it. It's just plain and bland. The key is that there's no passion at all.

I can't figure out why we should arrange for the first wife to undergo in vitro fertilization. The outcome of our in vitro fertilization is not very happy. We are not very close to each other in the eyes of the husband and wife or the older generation, and I feel sad in my heart.

This author is quite greedy. He even charges for publishing an announcement.

I'm convinced, and after reading more than a dozen chapters, why do I keep mentioning that person named Dai? It can't be the heroine, right? It's just a sentence about a wife in a previous life, and it's not clear what her relationship was like. The description is given in just a few sentences to make readers accept that this is the wife and the heroine? ? ?

I can't copy it well. I have a skeleton that I really haven't reborn, but the details are a mess.

In this book, the Virgin Mary came to the world. In the initial stage, she started donating a lot of houses, and then used the money to develop chips throughout the industry chain. It looked like she was very wealthy. As a result, I went to meetings to earn a little money from Southeast Asian takeaways!

The protagonist's character is to be cautious and walk on thin ice! Even if Zhanli doesn't dare to make a big show of it! What a saint! If you are bullied, you can only retaliate quietly. It feels like anyone can kick you! Especially for school matters, the main personnel are fine! In the end, the protagonist just said that he was forgiving him for the sake of his hometown! We shouldn't let the matter ferment first, and then wait until all the people involved have been dealt with! No matter how generous I am in forgiving the school, I say this is for my hometown! Otherwise, everyone would feel like the protagonist is easy to bully.

Guo Yuan