The Top Fighting Skills at the Beginning of Rebirth

Newbie, no logic at all. Newbies can have fun without thinking

Myocardial infarction text, 😒

It feels like I'm back to the novel 10 years ago

It's better not to write about rebirth, I feel like I'm just a dumb kid

The reborn soldier king is in the city, a star's personal expert

I don't know if it's my problem. At the moment, I don't know whether his main plot is to be a gangster or to fall in love. It's just one thing and the other. I don't like either one.

This is China, Gotham City, right?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is too stretched. I can't stand the sight of being a bodyguard. Isn't this a remake of the plot of Dragon King?

"The Underworld: The Rich Man's Thug"

There are too many conflicts in the early stage. One after another will easily cause visual fatigue. You have to give some foreshadowing. If it can be changed, let's change the previous one while not many people are watching.

Top-level fighting skills require top-level physical fitness. Does the protagonist, a high school student, have it?

The text content is as shown in the picture

I looked at a few pictures, but I really can't stand them anymore. No wonder no one saw them even though there were more than 200 pictures.

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this! You are a mature author, can't you update it consciously?

Cheating does not mean that the better your skills, the more successful you will be. It is a matter of courage. If you don't have the guts, you won't dare to use the technology even if it's good.

I saw that there are no tickets. Two updates a day are too few. Other readers saw it and thought we looked down on it. One person per person, not ten per person!!!

It fits the image of the heroine very well. (Trying to change your destiny against heaven!)

Why does it feel like the characters in it are all in a hurry?

It looks good, I'll keep it for a month before reading it, please keep it to ten chapters a day 😍

The introduction looks a bit familiar, like a novel I've read before. The protagonist is Su Pingnan.

It's pretty good, I've invested in it; come on, author

A total of six submissions were submitted, and the author didn't get a single update. If I had known that my brother was like this, I would not have voted.

So good

The title of the book is not very good, but the content is okay. Good luck to the author!

Can the author tell me which one is the main plot?

Come on, the writing is really good!