Rising in the E-Commerce Era

I would like to make some suggestions, Let's change the title of the book. This title has no characteristics. Commercial genres can be written as pan-entertainment closed loops, which are easy to write. Female supporting characters can be arranged to have more stars, Internet celebrities, etc. Those who are rich and women who are not I can count you as an old book friend. The soft rice flow is not popular now. Don't write emotional dramas, just write rational protagonists, and put interests first. I hope the new book will do well

The book is okay, but the character creation feels a bit like a child's play house. All the characters and events revolve around the protagonist, making the supporting character look like an NPC. When it comes to starting a business, what I wrote is okay, but as I go on, it becomes a bit blurry. Except for the little stutter, the female characters are basically the same mold, not to mention the male characters. Whether they are employees, rich second generation or business bosses, they all seem to fit into the mold. All the supporting characters appear to be there to benefit the protagonist without any contradiction. The plot advancement is a bit stiff. Whoever is needed will be arranged in the supporting role. There are only two chapters to foreshadow it, just like God said it will rain and it will rain immediately. When I started my business in the early days, my head hurt when I saw all kinds of money-making data and the teachers looked at it unreasonably. Although there was no poisonous point of pretending to be a slap in the face, there was no climax that people were looking forward to. The author's writing style has been enhanced. Of course, this is just my personal opinion after reading it. I hope the author will write better and better, come on! !

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Well, the book is okay, but business is business. Don't have so many female bosses. It's awkward.

In the Sweetheart chapter, I really didn't understand how Old Tao turned into Yu Youmeng's father. It was too forced.

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Is this a commercial novel or an emotional novel? Why write so many emotional scenes 😓

I'm really speechless after giving up. . . . . . . . . . . I'm so annoyed by this layout

Isn't it disgusting to kill someone's parents just to pick up girls?

It's very well written. Why doesn't anyone read it? I'm the 14th follower.