Holy Lord: Make Naruto Great Again

First of all, we can know that the protagonist first became the Holy Master of the Eight Great Demons, and then became stronger than the original Holy Master in wizard magic. Wizards are a scientific research profession, and powerful wizards are naturally powerful scientific researchers. How can Orochimaru compare with the protagonist? Do you need to pay so much attention to it? If the protagonist wants to do research, he can just divide himself into a group of clones. One of the three most poisonous points among Naruto fandoms: To do scientific research, you can only rely on big snakes! Especially when the protagonist himself is a high-end scientific researcher!

To be honest, writing novels is the most annoying thing. What is said, what is said, what is said coldly or coldly, or what is said indifferently, everything. Why do you need to add a saying?

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. You can watch it without thinking.

Alas, the three views are inconsistent! Farewell! ! !

It's well written and has a tendency to become popular. Those who say it's poisonous must have read it with their brains in mind.

Ntr is really annoying, and it is ntr for no reason. Just this time, the results will not be good, not to mention the current limit, it may even enter the palace

I specially rewarded you with 1 yuan to complain. Is the author an old man? The way of description, plot development, and character setting are very, very old. The same goes for conversations, with the corner of the mouth raised and a smile made at every turn, making an awkward declaration of allegiance. The character transformation is barely understandable. Originally, I thought it was acceptable enough to read without any bad points, but when I got to Yuhi Kurenai, I really couldn't stand it. After a father died, I was told a few words about sadness and kept it in my heart. The declaration of loyalty has the flavor of an ancient Internet novel, but it doesn't have the flavor of Naruto. It was okay and I could barely accept it, but then it started to get awkward. My father just died, and you wrote that he was amused, did you laugh? Talking and laughing? I don't know if normal people can laugh after a father has just died, apart from dividing the family property, but I don't think this is normal. My brain was punched hard by this paragraph. This punch was called "correction" and distorted my worldview and values. I'm sorry, I can't take this punch. If you are a young author and want to make progress, you still have to get scolded more often, otherwise you won't know what your problems are. I hope the next Naruto fanfic can be written more normally

The first chapter is extremely poisonous, and 14-year-old Kakashi is simply not qualified to be Hokage. How embarrassed have you been to those families. Even the civilian ninja couldn't hold it down.

The Holy Lord is the true Holy Lord, and he is also the Holy Lord who has been transcended. The True Holy Lord is the originator of wizards like Nishiki. Even if ninety-nine percent of his wisdom is wiped out by hell, he will definitely recover or learn on his own as long as it is not hell. After all, the devil represents the pinnacle of wisdom and strength in the adventure world (except for gods). He can definitely develop a new genre (dragon nature) with Naruto's chakra.

The protagonist is so awesome that it takes a long time to fight Danzo. .

What is the new thing written on the shelves? The protagonist said that he would not make the same mistakes again and use his mind to apply social rules. What was the result? What about your promotional efforts? What about your cult of personality? What about your control of public opinion? Soft power is simply not in place

As a time-traveler, why did the Holy Lord overturn so many times in Jackie Chan's world? He himself said it was because of the balance between black and white, and the fact that black's power was dispersed and ununited, while white's was the opposite. Isn't this the answer to clearing the level clearly written out? Kill other people with authority on Black's side to centralize power, or train White's two or five boys to create conflicts, or even strengthen White's power, and enhance Black's strength through balance.

Watching "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" now, I feel that it is entirely set in the United States. For example, the Twelve Talismans are obviously Chinese, but what does it mean to be handed over to the 13th District of the United States for safekeeping? Also, the so-called Qi of the wizard is obviously witchcraft from Western countries. For such a nondescript cartoon, it is still produced by us in China. I feel that there is definitely something wrong with this company that needs to be investigated.

It feels like the plot is too forced. You either start from a baby, or you try to change the character of the protagonist as much as possible, and then it jumps out at the beginning.

What do readers want to see when reading fanfiction? Author, do you understand? If you want to wear an aborigine, you can choose a one-shot supporting role instead of an important role. If you like to wear an important role, why don't you wear it on Kushina, so that you can experience the Daijiebao who always takes the girl? Isn't it more interesting?

It depends on what the author thinks, whether the plan is stable or turbulent. Stability means normal development, and turbulence means the harem route. Now Kushina has some signs of it. It's easier to follow up if it's stable. As for the Tiger Talisman, can it only be separated and not merged? Is it possible to create a combination similar to Dragon Ball?

Check out these book reviews and read the first few chapters. No wonder he rushes to the street

Kakashi 😍😍😍

The fourth

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When are you going to the New World? So invincible

The first one is me again