Captain Death Is All My Student

For a descendant of the five great nobles to say that his brother was admitted to Mao with sixth-level spiritual pressure, it shows that this is very powerful in the Soul Society. How can there be a tenth-level spiritual pressure? Are you talking about the Douluo Continent Shinigami Chapter? Moreover, Haiyan graduated from Mao in one year and became the vice-captain in five years. In terms of the time scale of death, this is very short. Therefore, the vice-captain may actually be a seventh-level reiatsu Your setting can be said to be messy and inexplicable.

Judging from the current situation, the protagonist can use his identity as a teacher to cultivate his own power, from thoughts to ghost ways. Most of the academy's members are civilians and they have a good impression of the protagonist. Once the number of people increases, they can adjust the Kidou formation and so on, and the respect points will naturally be high.

Is the Death Boss outfit light blue? ? ? ? Isn't it black? Shouldn't people who have died and gone through soul burial have no memories of this life? You don't go into the basic details of the basic low-level settings. Too abstract.

The spiritual pressure is wrong, there are 20 levels in total, level 6 and above are chief officers, levels 4-5 are high-ranking officers and deputy captains, levels 3-1 are captains, and if you die above level 3, you will leave a corpse, and if you die below level 3, it will dissipate! Is your change a bit dramatic?

Just write it well, it's not bad. I feel like it adds too much of the author's personal opinions and understanding. There's no need to write out these opinions. It's too much. Everyone's understanding of anime is different. There's no need for anyone to convince others and force others to be better.

After reading Chapters 51 and 52, the protagonist felt like he was both responsible and independent. He took the route of respect, and then his friend paid the price of the captain to protect 3 people. He was killed by the Kasumadaji family who broke the rules. He didn't dare to kill them, so he confronted them silently, and then fell silent, saying that he made a mistake in his decision-making. I said earlier that I wanted to write about the changes in thinking of an ordinary person, but now are you so calm? What about your ordinary thinking? What are unspoken rules? They are default rules and cannot be put on the table. As for the Kasumitaji family's breaking of rules, even if the protagonist kills him, what can the Kasumitaji family do to him? Blatantly killing the protagonist? Funny

In fact, I have a good idea, that is, the protagonist hints to Aizen intentionally or unintentionally that as long as he engages in nobles, the protagonist will provide him with some help even if he will not join his team. You can even write out the interpretation of Aizen's swastika. The original Aizen didn't understand the swastika, which is a pity. 😃The Okayashiro family is still very interesting. It just happened that Yan Luo Jingdian copied the protagonist's interpretation of the swastika and restrained it, forcing Aizen to interpret the swastika.

In the first chapter, I felt there was a problem. How could anyone who had gone through soul burial remember his or her previous name? Everyone who has watched the first theatrical version of Death: No One's Memories knows this. When Ichigo Kurosaki was playing with his missing body, Akane Shizuku, he discovered that she had so-called living memories. Then he met Urahara Kisuke later and the store manager told him clearly that he did not, or that all the wandering souls in Rukongai would not have memories of the present world. After they passed through the soul burial, everything was equivalent to reincarnation.

Cong Sheba's outfit is all light blue with flowing cloud patterns. I find it so outrageous that I can't stand it anymore. Death boss uniforms must be all black. You can change the style. No one will tell you if you change it to a jk sailor uniform. The style should be kept basic and the color black. In the latest Four Nobles chapter, you can refer to the setting pictures of the captains. You've changed the color, it's really outrageous.

Then let me explain that the protagonist I want to write about is a real person, and his behavior logic should be consistent with a real person, not a tool like a game character. As for what is real, for example, Now there is a goal that needs to be achieved. I know that if I work in three shifts on 996, I can overcomplete the task and be appreciated by the leadership, but I would rather complete it slowly and leisurely, because I am not a robot and I can't stand that kind of life. And if this is a game character, then it doesn't matter. I want him to work 72 hours a day and it doesn't matter, because I won't do it myself anyway. The above metaphors may be a bit exaggerated, but in my case, their internal logic is the same.

It's a nice behind-the-scenes fanfic. I don't understand why many people like to read Invincible's cool articles. Is Aizen weak at the same time as the protagonist has already begun to touch porcelain? I just like this kind of fan fiction

Just because you, writers who think you are very good, have almost killed a very good subject.

Regarding the choice of adding points for the protagonist, the author thought of a more appropriate analogy. This is actually like you now have a final goal of 10 billion, and then you initially have a small goal of 100 million. To achieve this final goal, you have two options. One is to deposit in the bank, buy yourself a super high degree, and then work hard in an outside company. In this way, you may be able to complete your goal in 10 years. The other is to invest the money in some companies that produce stable returns, and live a nine-to-five life every day, waiting for the returns from these companies to reach your target. In this case, it may take you 20 years or more. If there was no restriction that the final goal must be achieved within 10 years, I would not choose the first one anyway. The same is true for the protagonist in my novel.

The first generation name information was leaked and the translation was biased First team: Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni Second team: Uruhara Kinroku Third team: Shifouin Senhi Fourth team: Shishima Chigiri Fifth team: Ohana Danjiro Sixth team: Saito Immortal br>Seventh Division: Execution Nobu Tsuna Eighth Division: Shikatori Yunsai Ninth Division: Kumenai Yantetsu Tenth Division: Wang Tukawa Yuuki Eleventh Division: Unohana Yachiryu Twelfth Division: Shanding Temple Yubi Thirteenth Division: Inverse Bone Saizo

Yoruichi has become the captain, but Aizen is still studying?

Mole City Shuangye is extremely talented in ghost magic, with black coffin, thousand-hand cannon, and one-sword cremation. Unohana, Gengki, Kaiyashiki (Hungry Corridor), Mole Castle (Rain and Dew Pomegranate), these four Kenhachi are the best matches in the past. Mole City's ability is to merge into the spirit child, and Kaiyashiki's ability is to swallow the spirit child, which can be regarded as being defeated.

I would like to remind the author that the protagonist's six abilities are too flashy, so it's best to recycle them. Explanation at the beginning: Reveal it, there is a chance of victory. I'll change it for you, for example: break through the siege and have a chance of winning. Swastika interpretation: surrounded by thousands of people, dawn breaks, the chance of decisive victory (or the chance of victory).

I feel that Hisagi Shuhei is so pitiful and has no sense of existence at all. I quickly give him a cheat and become the captain directly after Rokusha Kensei leaves.