I Will Practice More in the Heavens

I don't know if I can write it down later.

It feels very good, the author, please give it a try

Time passed by. After the Three Kingdoms were unified, Li Xing topped up all his attributes, including his lifespan. After accumulating attribute points to the limit, he pressed the attribute plus button and shattered the void, leaving only a legend of "God will ascend and continue to conquer all races for the human race without being enslaved." Before Li Xing arrived in the new world, he had no time to explore, and an old voice rang in his ears, "Welcome to the ancient era..." Li Xing: "..." Hey, it's "After Ascension"! ! !

Not to mention that someone else Zhang Fei saved your life, but he also belittled Liu Guan and Zhang. He is different from Liu Guan and Zhang Dao and does not conspire with him. He is the same as Cao Cao who slaughtered the city 🤭

I just subscribed to a few chapters. Are you trying to disgust readers? Well, arrange for the disappearance of the eight array diagrams to trigger the plot. I am sure someone has been poisoned. I will order a few more chapters to see. I will also force-fed the poison. I will leave.

Let Dong Zhuo go in front, and kill him in the back. Earlier, he told Liu Bei that he didn't like intrigues in the court and only wanted to practice in the mountains. Later, he helped Cao Cao train his troops and coach his generals.

Damn, I just finished watching Three Kingdoms and I ordered them all. It's bullshit. There are many ways to advance the plot and you just chose the most disgusting one. Shouldn't you just take it with you if you're not sure whether to run or not? Otherwise, if you have a bad temper, you will be killed, and you will yell that this is the Eight Formation Diagram, and you are afraid that others will not hear it? Chapter 20 is just like the subscription fee for the Three Kingdoms. It won't work well in the later stages of the Three Kingdoms. Forget it, I'll cancel it.

Chapter 16 I can't stand it. Although it is a novel, it does not follow official history or romance. If you don't check the real author information, let's not touch the Three Kingdoms. Moreover, after reading the comments, there are repeated jumps in historical fiction and fantasy. In addition, the characters are written too stupidly. The protagonist has no human feelings. Occasionally, the Notre Dame Literary Youth, the boss who sells guns, parted ways with Zhang Fei and the other three because he didn't want to kill him. How can someone you met once be more important than the person who provides you with food, accommodation and teaches you martial arts? If you want to practice, you can't just follow and help. Where to practice is not cultivation, but a system. Summary: It's very similar to Tang Shenwang.

If you want to discredit Meng De, it's very simple, just tell him exactly what he did. But if you want to smear the emperor's uncle, you have to analyze everything about the emperor's uncle with the most vicious and careful attitude, and then you can smear him. Because they do not believe that a person will leave his country for his brothers, they prefer to believe that a person should be utilitarian, and they firmly believe that a person should abandon everything for the sake of benefit. Selfish and cowardly people will hope that the light of others is not so dazzling. That makes you look less mean.​

Her mother is covering the sky. Beiming Shengong is related to Zhetian. Damn it, you really dare to write this

I heard that Lu Bu is invincible on horseback and Dian Wei is invincible on horseback, so we might as well ride on Dian Wei with Lu Bu in our arms and dare to ask if there is anyone in the world who can rival us.

Only the strength is added, and the physique is added, but the speed is not increased at all. I don't understand why this is so popular in Qidian. Aren't there some connections between strength, speed and physique? How do you increase the strength while keeping everything else unchanged?

I met Xiang Yu in the Three Kingdoms, and I told him that Liu Bang must be killed because Cao Cao wanted to rebel against Liu Bang. Later I saw Li Shimin and told him that Ying Zheng was a great emperor and he deposed Zhu Yuanzhang 🙂🙂 This is my story in the Three Kingdoms.

The market is getting bigger and bigger, there are many mixed martial arts that cannot be attacked, and it is also grafted with worlds such as Zhetian. It is difficult to straighten out the logic, let alone write a wonderful story.

I can't stand the world of Gu Long. He was tricked by a thief. After the trick, he was speechless before he was treated. He was poisoned and abandoned.

Really, all you need to add here is spirit and spirit, and I feel like it's fine. What about strength, speed, and physique are just nonsense.

The latest few pictures have started to commit the same mistakes of all authors, suppressing the protagonist. You add a little bit of text, and 99% of it is 99%. The last 100% you start to say depends on comprehension, then what do you add, the system is nothing, funny, you can say that you don't understand and add points, but you have come this far, and you still use this low-end method to suppress the protagonist. Do you think readers will buy it? Shuangwen is halfway through driving, do you want to get out of the car?

The plot of Sikong Zhaixing is simply extremely poisonous. Is this because the results are too good? It was poisoned when it was put on the shelves.

? ? ? Is it a deliberately disgusting plot? All your attributes are 10 points. As a result, something was stolen. Haha, what is your 10 speed points used for? No, it's 12 o'clock? Your best player in the world has been stolen. Then can I understand that if someone has a sharp object on his hand, he can directly insert it into your neck and kill you before you can react?

The more I write, the more childish I feel. I feel like the main character is a modern person who thinks nonsense. He doesn't need any credit, as long as he has enough force, he will be the Duke of Wu. Others join the army and practice martial arts every day. Are you sure you can do this? How about the protagonist conquering the world by himself and then directly offering the famous generals of the Three Kingdoms as his ancestors?

To be honest, after the update, it was not as comfortable as the Three Kingdoms chapter. A thief stole the protagonist's things, and showed mercy to him just because he was Sikong Tongxin. Don't say that he had no bad intentions. It's like modern times. He stole your mobile phone. Can you have a good impression of the thief? Under normal circumstances, wouldn't you beat him up? It feels like the author wrote it for the development of the plot, without considering the readers' feelings at all.

After all, I spent some money to read a little bit of the previous part, so don't think my words sound bad. The beginning is very attractive, but it doesn't work at the end. Multiple worlds are forcibly kneaded together. The key author's integration ability and balance ability are not good, and there are many crazy places. For example, Zhang Sanfeng at the martial arts level has a relationship with the world of Zhetian? It is better to write about astronomy honestly than to forcibly knead them together, causing strong contrast and confusion. Then let's talk about the plot. After the first dungeon, the protagonist basically flashes by in the subsequent world, with no main line and no purpose. All this astronomy has been written to death, so what if there is nothing new? There is no novel setting and imagination. Good writing and story would be fine, but unfortunately there is none. It is like a programmed monster-killing upgrade that has already produced results. It is very dull without unknowns.

From the reader's point of view, there is only one idea: it's broken, run away! But the author was obviously so excited that he couldn't stop the car and simply let himself go and wrote a book for his dream! Just look at the table of contents, the text is really unbearable😌

No matter how you look at it, this book is a mess!

Alas, I said a few months ago that the pit was too big and too deep for the author to fill it in. As I filled it in, I fell into the hole and couldn't get out. It's a pity, what I wrote before is pretty good. If you have to dig such a big hole later, you will bury yourself!

My initial setting was also based on Zhutianliu (funny)

The Three Kingdoms was pretty good but fell apart later on, especially in terms of cultivation. The Three Kingdoms seemed very strong and there was nothing wrong with it. None of the thousands of attributes at the end felt very strong. It seemed stronger and then average, and it would be even more confusing if combined with the TV series. It felt not as strong as the Three Kingdoms, but the attributes were written so high 😥

For now, it's a good and high-quality product, keep it up and keep going! !

This book does it! Monthly ticket! Confinement nanny! All for you!

Is it too much to be sophisticated?