Back in the Village: A Countryside Life

Most of the plot is about the family's filial piety and trivial matters. Only a small part of the plot is about farming. I'm not here to see your family's filial piety. Even feeding pigs has happened several times. That's enough. You're putting the cart before the horse.

Rural novels use too many hooks, which seems boring. Especially the hook that speeds up time. If you use it for breeding, it's nothing. Are you really going to buy it? Are you really not afraid of being investigated? You're selling too much.

The most annoying novel is that fruits or vegetables are obtained by using golden fingers, and when sold, they are said to be new varieties cultivated by oneself. Your family members and neighbors all know everything about it.

It's okay to sell goods through live broadcast, but the profit distribution is simply incomprehensible. Everything belongs to the protagonist, but only half of it is divided. It's a pure injustice. The author also wrote a line about brothers settling the accounts haha. Sure enough, there is a reason for the poor results.

In Chapter 103, the protagonist sells fruit on live broadcast. With so much sold, the protagonist must have at least 80% of the credit, and the final share is 35%.

The writing is too exaggerated and impetuous, and it doesn't match pastoral life at all. You must have written a cool article. If we want to read cool articles, why don't we read this?

Don't write about pastoral stories. Don't write about a rich man. It's all warm and light. Just add some family stories and interactions between people and pets. That'll be fine.

When writing a farming novel, write it slowly, and don't rush into making huge sales. Do you think it's you who are stupid or the buyer who is stupid? How dare you ask for something of unknown origin! There is also a platform. Ordinary mineral water is only 1 yuan, but Evian is expensive. Do you understand?

I've read more than 30 chapters, and Goldfinger is awesome, but the author doesn't know what's going on. He's been writing about family affairs. There are only a few words in more than 30 chapters about using plug-ins to develop. It's not fun and verbose. I really don't know where I can make people want to read it. There are also many typos/wrong words. I guess I will post it directly after finishing it without checking it.

Author, you haven't considered why you can't watch it for free.